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  Inside You
by jude forese
Saturday, April 09, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Inside you
I can feel love’s surrender
Surrounding my shape

A cushion
Of vigorous yet luscious embraces

Inside you
Heated juices flow
From within syrupy membranes

And I am as smooth and solid
As sugar cane inside a field of dreams

Inside you
There is light within the covering

There is passion yet defined

There is an opening to a world
At one time, I could only imagine



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Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 7/20/2005
As sugar cane inside a field of dreams - delicious
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/5/2005
a home run in this field of dreams.

ron
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/11/2005
Robert, this one is sweet heat.
Sensuality at it's best
Reviewed by Aberjhani 4/11/2005
Beautiful inside,outside, and all levels in betweeen.
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 4/10/2005
you really ought to give us some warning or something... I always psyche myself up to think and get lost in some philosophical wonderment or dreamtime, but, man oh man... and I mean precisely that. very nicely done.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 4/10/2005
I almost missed this! Ummmm, this is a stirring

piece of work...to put it mildly!



"Inside you

There is light within the covering

There is passion yet defined

There is an opening to a world

At one time, I could only imagine"



I love that!
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick 4/10/2005
Yesss, this one's a keeper. Mm mm good to the last drop of words. :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/10/2005
This is a very sensous delightful write that is full of passion!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 4/10/2005
Enchantedly sensual, Robert...

Peace, Carole
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 4/10/2005
mmm..incredible write..sensual..spiritual..REAL! wow!
saved this one..
Vesna*
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 4/10/2005
Sounds like you found comfort. Excellent. ~ Sara
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 4/10/2005
as always well done
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 4/10/2005
Sensual beauty!!!!
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 4/10/2005
Erotica can't seep in any more sweetly and stylishly than this... ;0)
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 4/10/2005
Explosive sensuality ... think I need a drink and a smoke!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente 4/9/2005
Very sensual write, Ace.
I was really getting into it!
That's good!

Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Dave Harm 4/9/2005
An imagination, filled with love... never ends, just keeps expanding... excellent write
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 4/9/2005
Greeeeeeeaaaaaattttt! I love the sensuousness of this poem...the images are wonderful! ;) Silver
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 4/9/2005
Robert!...... I love this side of you! This is raw passion, hot and sensual with vivid imagery that makes the mouth water! ( and the thighs squiver!)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/9/2005
A poem like this will put saccharin out of
business... the berry prefers sugar cane;-)
luscious poem...

Eileen
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/9/2005
well, now...this is breathtaking, robert! superbly sensual; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by George Jackson 4/9/2005
Outstanding, Robert.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 4/9/2005
Sensuality becomes you, Jude, me sweet... you can lift a reader to amazing heights and then caress her slowly back to earth. Tasteful erotica that is tasty, smooth and definitely consuming. Passion becomes you. katy xox
Reviewed by L. Figgins 4/9/2005
aaaashes...
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 4/9/2005
A beautifully passionate and sensuous poem, Jude ... Smooth and solid as a sugar cane? Mercy! ;)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/9/2005
Lovely and sweet!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 4/9/2005
This tastes like love in full bloom, Robert. A sintillating write as sweet as maple syrup poured upon a feast of intriguing thoughts. This is very nice!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 4/9/2005

~~Nordette
Reviewed by M Flack 4/9/2005
Passionate and erotic. Very full of images created by well crafted words. Well done...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/9/2005
Sounds like a wondrous new world - and this is quite a poem, Robert.
Reviewed by A PAX 4/9/2005
classy and erotic........beautiful :)
Reviewed by George Carroll 4/9/2005
Exquisitely done as only the master of metaphors can do. A youthful look at loves first encounter in the depths of passion and fulfillment.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 4/9/2005
I do like this, the metaphor is a total sugar-rush of expression and passion, excellent Jude.

Paul;-]
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 4/9/2005
Jude, this should carry a health warning to diabetics... and to those of us prone to spontaneous combustion! Searing passion that is not only physical but spiritual as well, a total mystic fusion. "Hot" is an altogether too cold and leaden word to use to describe the intensity here: a metamorphic furnace! There is yet a tenderness in the flame, too, I think, and an elegant beauty. Wholly melting. TY Kate xx

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