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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/20/2005 |
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| As sugar cane inside a field of dreams - delicious |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/5/2005 |
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a home run in this field of dreams.
ron |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
4/11/2005 |
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Robert, this one is sweet heat.
Sensuality at it's best |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
4/11/2005 |
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| Beautiful inside,outside, and all levels in betweeen. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
4/10/2005 |
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| you really ought to give us some warning or something... I always psyche myself up to think and get lost in some philosophical wonderment or dreamtime, but, man oh man... and I mean precisely that. very nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
4/10/2005 |
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I almost missed this! Ummmm, this is a stirring
piece of work...to put it mildly!
"Inside you
There is light within the covering
There is passion yet defined
There is an opening to a world
At one time, I could only imagine"
I love that! |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick |
4/10/2005 |
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| Yesss, this one's a keeper. Mm mm good to the last drop of words. :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/10/2005 |
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| This is a very sensous delightful write that is full of passion! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/10/2005 |
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Enchantedly sensual, Robert...
Peace, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
4/10/2005 |
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mmm..incredible write..sensual..spiritual..REAL! wow!
saved this one..
Vesna* |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
4/10/2005 |
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| Sounds like you found comfort. Excellent. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
4/10/2005 |
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| as always well done |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
4/10/2005 |
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| Sensual beauty!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
4/10/2005 |
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Erotica can't seep in any more sweetly and stylishly than this... ;0)
Love&Light*
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/10/2005 |
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Explosive sensuality ... think I need a drink and a smoke!
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente |
4/9/2005 |
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Very sensual write, Ace.
I was really getting into it!
That's good!
Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
4/9/2005 |
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| An imagination, filled with love... never ends, just keeps expanding... excellent write |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
4/9/2005 |
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| Greeeeeeeaaaaaattttt! I love the sensuousness of this poem...the images are wonderful! ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
4/9/2005 |
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| Robert!...... I love this side of you! This is raw passion, hot and sensual with vivid imagery that makes the mouth water! ( and the thighs squiver!) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/9/2005 |
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A poem like this will put saccharin out of
business... the berry prefers sugar cane;-)
luscious poem...
Eileen
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/9/2005 |
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well, now...this is breathtaking, robert! superbly sensual; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
4/9/2005 |
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| Outstanding, Robert. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
4/9/2005 |
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| Sensuality becomes you, Jude, me sweet... you can lift a reader to amazing heights and then caress her slowly back to earth. Tasteful erotica that is tasty, smooth and definitely consuming. Passion becomes you. katy xox |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/9/2005 |
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| aaaashes... |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) |
4/9/2005 |
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| A beautifully passionate and sensuous poem, Jude ... Smooth and solid as a sugar cane? Mercy! ;) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/9/2005 |
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Lovely and sweet!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/9/2005 |
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This tastes like love in full bloom, Robert. A sintillating write as sweet as maple syrup poured upon a feast of intriguing thoughts. This is very nice!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
4/9/2005 |
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~~Nordette  |
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| Reviewed by M Flack |
4/9/2005 |
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| Passionate and erotic. Very full of images created by well crafted words. Well done... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/9/2005 |
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| Sounds like a wondrous new world - and this is quite a poem, Robert. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/9/2005 |
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| classy and erotic........beautiful :) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/9/2005 |
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| Exquisitely done as only the master of metaphors can do. A youthful look at loves first encounter in the depths of passion and fulfillment. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
4/9/2005 |
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I do like this, the metaphor is a total sugar-rush of expression and passion, excellent Jude.
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/9/2005 |
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| Jude, this should carry a health warning to diabetics... and to those of us prone to spontaneous combustion! Searing passion that is not only physical but spiritual as well, a total mystic fusion. "Hot" is an altogether too cold and leaden word to use to describe the intensity here: a metamorphic furnace! There is yet a tenderness in the flame, too, I think, and an elegant beauty. Wholly melting. TY Kate xx |
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