|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|As sugar cane inside a field of dreams - delicious|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|a home run in this field of dreams.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Robert, this one is sweet heat.
Sensuality at it's best
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Beautiful inside,outside, and all levels in betweeen.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|you really ought to give us some warning or something... I always psyche myself up to think and get lost in some philosophical wonderment or dreamtime, but, man oh man... and I mean precisely that. very nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|I almost missed this! Ummmm, this is a stirring
piece of work...to put it mildly!
There is light within the covering
There is passion yet defined
There is an opening to a world
At one time, I could only imagine"
I love that!
|Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick
|Yesss, this one's a keeper. Mm mm good to the last drop of words. :)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a very sensous delightful write that is full of passion!|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Enchantedly sensual, Robert...
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|mmm..incredible write..sensual..spiritual..REAL! wow!
saved this one..
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Sounds like you found comfort. Excellent. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|as always well done|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Erotica can't seep in any more sweetly and stylishly than this... ;0)
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Explosive sensuality ... think I need a drink and a smoke!
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|Very sensual write, Ace.
I was really getting into it!
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|An imagination, filled with love... never ends, just keeps expanding... excellent write|
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Greeeeeeeaaaaaattttt! I love the sensuousness of this poem...the images are wonderful! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Robert!...... I love this side of you! This is raw passion, hot and sensual with vivid imagery that makes the mouth water! ( and the thighs squiver!)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A poem like this will put saccharin out of
business... the berry prefers sugar cane;-)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|well, now...this is breathtaking, robert! superbly sensual; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Sensuality becomes you, Jude, me sweet... you can lift a reader to amazing heights and then caress her slowly back to earth. Tasteful erotica that is tasty, smooth and definitely consuming. Passion becomes you. katy xox|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|A beautifully passionate and sensuous poem, Jude ... Smooth and solid as a sugar cane? Mercy! ;)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Lovely and sweet!!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This tastes like love in full bloom, Robert. A sintillating write as sweet as maple syrup poured upon a feast of intriguing thoughts. This is very nice!
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Reviewed by M Flack
|Passionate and erotic. Very full of images created by well crafted words. Well done...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sounds like a wondrous new world - and this is quite a poem, Robert.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|classy and erotic........beautiful :)|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Exquisitely done as only the master of metaphors can do. A youthful look at loves first encounter in the depths of passion and fulfillment.|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|I do like this, the metaphor is a total sugar-rush of expression and passion, excellent Jude.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Jude, this should carry a health warning to diabetics... and to those of us prone to spontaneous combustion! Searing passion that is not only physical but spiritual as well, a total mystic fusion. "Hot" is an altogether too cold and leaden word to use to describe the intensity here: a metamorphic furnace! There is yet a tenderness in the flame, too, I think, and an elegant beauty. Wholly melting. TY Kate xx|