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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
4/11/2005 |
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Quite a thought-provoking ending line on a thought-provoking poem.
Kudos, Kate! |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/10/2005 |
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Love this, Kate. Powerful last line. This is where all poets dwell. It's a 'matter' of connecting the dots between...I have a funny little ditty for you:
Love2
Pythagorus
was amorous
over shapely numbers
-LG |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/10/2005 |
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| I hated that childhood rule - so I always slipped between those cracks, too - and it was marvelous! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/10/2005 |
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| metaphysical metaphor extraordinaire! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
4/10/2005 |
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Life is a matter of time and reality:
quality of moment versus quantity.
kate...wonderful....fantastic write...clap clap clap...love n luck....BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/9/2005 |
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| I used to jump over them when I was a kid, now I know why. Splendid |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
4/9/2005 |
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| Great write... in a world of circles, no walls, no lines, no cracks, we can't fall through, or fall out... |
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| Reviewed by joseph miller |
4/9/2005 |
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... laid down on the streets, written in the stars ...
I can't explain why I love those lines. Great write!
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/9/2005 |
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I love what we can discover in those in-between spaces..
You Kate, are an excellent guide with superior direction
Another gem!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
4/9/2005 |
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Whow! Blew me away Kate!
You are missed and I am glad to
were having back!
Sincerely,
Becca P (Henry) Lang |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/9/2005 |
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excellent write, kate! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/9/2005 |
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Kate,
An enthralling universe you take us to--magical! Mystical! MARVELOUS!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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