|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Quite a thought-provoking ending line on a thought-provoking poem.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Love this, Kate. Powerful last line. This is where all poets dwell. It's a 'matter' of connecting the dots between...I have a funny little ditty for you:
over shapely numbers
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I hated that childhood rule - so I always slipped between those cracks, too - and it was marvelous!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|metaphysical metaphor extraordinaire!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Life is a matter of time and reality:
quality of moment versus quantity.
kate...wonderful....fantastic write...clap clap clap...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I used to jump over them when I was a kid, now I know why. Splendid|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Great write... in a world of circles, no walls, no lines, no cracks, we can't fall through, or fall out...|
|Reviewed by joseph miller
|... laid down on the streets, written in the stars ...
I can't explain why I love those lines. Great write!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love what we can discover in those in-between spaces..
You Kate, are an excellent guide with superior direction
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Whow! Blew me away Kate!
You are missed and I am glad to
were having back!
Becca P (Henry) Lang
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, kate! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
An enthralling universe you take us to--magical! Mystical! MARVELOUS!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)