|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very powerful and creative character study ...
your poetic voicing is consistant and strong ...
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Now, How did you get my life into one
poem? (grin) You are so very talented.
Love to you,
Becca P (Henry) Lang
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|So well-expressed; so powerfully portrayed, Sue... this cuts with surgical precision and leaves us with no relief at the end - which, I am sure, is the intention!! How many are victors and yet still in chains?! Always alone - how sad. But still with head held high. You sure do know how to tell 'em. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Beth Elaine
|Wow, this is a whole book condensed in a poem! Wonderfully triumphant and intriguing.|
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|Knowledge increases power. The best thing she had acquired.
A lot of us are her position. Isolated, lonely, just working silently
to obliterate whatever shame that may have dogged her path. Sue, you have touched something in my heart right now. I feel like crying.
Thanks a great deal for this offering. It reached the depth of my heart. I appreciate you!
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Excellent write! Sometimes the only thing we have left is our dignity and identity of self, and this needs to be fiercly protected. Unfortunately, like everything, it comes at a cost to ourselves...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful message Sue!!
It's like someone told me the otherday....she wonders if my husband really knows the woman I am....because he never looks deeper than skin deep....and does not have the power to look into my soul!!
As a matter of fact I wonder how many of my own family REALLY knows me for who I really am....not the joker but the deeper side of me!!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Powerful and it reflects the isolation of
our society. But I know that there is the
danger there and so that makes it necessary.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A powerful piece, Sue. I think sometimes walls are truly needed for self protection, but at other times they truly do keep us far too isolated from one another.|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Sue--nicely done. I like how this ended with her pride intact. Coping skills and armor aren't so bad when protection is needed.|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|She can't get any lonelier than alone with her pride...
Good write, Sue.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|the armor of survival...........
not all have this
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Oh, so sad. Nicely written though.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent write on a sad topic,yet
we each have to sing our own song.
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|Sad write, Sue.
I enjoyed the story line.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an excellent writer
William......Peace & Love