|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|We all feel this at times and come back to life as ourselves though. Good thinking on this one and descriptive characteristic appeal to all.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|enjoyed the read|
|Reviewed by Maria Deyana M.V.
|Very nice and sweet!
|Reviewed by Pier Tyler
|A fantastic and cute write.|
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|hehehe! real fun piece!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Delightful write and fun read.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|cute little write Regina....wonderful!!!!|
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|poignant and sweet. Franz|
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
I like this one. I sometimes I feel like a whirlwind.
I want to bring in change amongst the leadership of countries that
had neglected the poor.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|hey Gina, a fine tail of a little tale, in the air, watch it! hehe. G|
|Reviewed by Bob Holt
|I also feel that way often. Then on many days I meet that damn Aflac duck. I wish he wasn't there.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes i know exactly how you feel ... very cunning little poem ... delight to read ...|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Succinctly sweet and perfect - enjoyed!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wishful thinking, Gina. Makes me feel whimsical and somehow free. Love it. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Hello, Gina. :) I feel young when I think of ducks, ducklings, quacks and webbed paddling, disappearing under water, without seeing its consequences, or, not caring, just, free-stroking on soft, placid water. The first line, though, shows exactly why the piece is taken with a rye smile of 'empathy' to older viewers of world events and humanistically abhorrant, unbelievable acts of repetitive abuses and never-ending stupidity... Um, sorry, I'm ranting, abit. :) Oh, and then the title, Up to ... where? No more 'beautiful balloons' until feelings overcome thinking...
Still, as a 'wish of weariness', I'm with you...
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Easy To Pretend You Are Not Here-Just Close Your Eyes_
But, To Acheive Peace Of Mind Go In Dark Quiet Room Close Your Eyes & Listen With Your Mind You May Just Hear (God) Pretending He Isn't Talking (Watching) To You...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|oh, to be a duck at times...just swim, eat, and quack, swim, eat, and quack...oh, such as the life! :)
thanks for sharing this delightful write, regina; very well done! BRAVA! *QUACK*
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|How wonderful it would be to be not there:) :)
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A lovely whimsical write...would you like some bread lol
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
An esoteric message under the shadows of this poetic enigma in a clear picture of poetized words.
Long Healthy Ctreative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I often wish I were a duck, Regina!|
|Reviewed by Patrick Talty
With exemplary brevity and the right balance of tone and theme, you have encapsulated here a mood that most readers would relate to and, hence, enjoy!
This poem is surely a good example of what Ralph Waldo Emerson was referring to when he wrote in his preface to *Parnassus*: "Poetry teaches the enormous force of a few words, and, in proportion to the inspiration, checks loquacity."
|Reviewed by Reginald Birch
|I think of you with more of the grace of a swan, but if you want to be a duck now and again who am I to stop you quacking, though certainly no ugly duckling.
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|a cute write
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|That would be great....I think I will fly away from trouble if I could fly like a duck...or even hide my head under my wing!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Regina, A poem full of whimsy! Excellent write!
I've felt this way too!;-)