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Flawless Love
by M. R. B.
Sunday, April 10, 2005
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Grandson:  Nana, I love you more
than all the race cars in the world.

Grandmother:  And I love you more
than all the tires on all the race cars
in the world.

Now that's love.

©  MRD 2005

An exchange between my five year old grandson and myself,


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Reviewed by richard cederberg
INDEED! Heart touching and reflects the wisdom of Grandmother in all things of the heart! Richard Cederberg
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
soooo precious!

Reviewed by Karen Cino
The most precious kind of love there is. It is indeed a flawless love. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Sweet and beautiful indeed, very special.
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
So sweet! Beautiful!!!

God bless, Mari!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
this was so sweet! What a lovely way to express love, so cute!

Reviewed by Barbara Spring
I like this. I have a grandson, too, so that's very sincere love.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
You a GRANDMA??!!! Wow!! Found myself feeling really broody a year or so ago, about becoming a grandmother... but maybe that had more to do with the young man who was in my daughter's life at the time!! :)) You're a natural communicator, Mari... you speak the language of love that EVERYONE can understand! Bless you, you're an absolute STAR!! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Dave Harm
Oh, the simple joys of grandchildren... great write
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
This put a big, BIG smile on my face.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

"Flawless Love" - perfect poetic write ... outstanding!!


Reviewed by William Bonilla
isn't love great?
enjoyed your piece

William .....Peace
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Ha, I can just see the smile on your face, Mari, you were given a gift, a reason for being, for loving and feeling and thinking and surviving, for being a flawed human who begot -- this 'boy'. :)

For me, it's girls, two under fourteen, no fives allowed, please. Tough years, from birth to upper-age...

You brought a smile, and a lesson, and a hug of life into view with steady, short succinctness, balanced with loving humor, and maybe even irony, to this reader's reality-slaught mind of adulthood.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Your piece
Reviewed by Aberjhani
So that's why I dreamed last night about changing tires on race cars! Now that's a powerful poem:-)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Love is all, Mari!!! You've found a unique way of expressing it in your verses. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
awwwww so sweet, and love between a grandchild and the grandmother. Now that is love, when a small boy can say he loves beyond his toy cars. This is a very good, and sweet write Mari. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth,& ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Lol that certainly is Love...bless

Reviewed by Patrick McCormick
Very nicely put.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Oh that's so sweet. ;) Great!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Awwwww ... this is so precious!
It's moments like these that last forever.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Sounds like love to me, Mari!
Reviewed by George Carroll
Masterful exchange of mutual love of each other,
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations
Oh, yes, this IS Love! :0)
Reviewed by jude forese
excellent comparative parallelism ...

you two naturally interact with each other ...
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
sounds like love to me

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Mari, this is the epitome of love! Brava!
Our greatest delight, grandchildren;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Hehehehehe yip thats love for sure!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Precious! He's about 5 years old? Don't you love being a grandmother?!
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