|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|INDEED! Heart touching and reflects the wisdom of Grandmother in all things of the heart! Richard Cederberg|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Reviewed by Karen Cino
|The most precious kind of love there is. It is indeed a flawless love. Excellent write.
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Sweet and beautiful indeed, very special.|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|So sweet! Beautiful!!!
God bless, Mari!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|this was so sweet! What a lovely way to express love, so cute!
|Reviewed by Barbara Spring
|I like this. I have a grandson, too, so that's very sincere love.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You a GRANDMA??!!! Wow!! Found myself feeling really broody a year or so ago, about becoming a grandmother... but maybe that had more to do with the young man who was in my daughter's life at the time!! :)) You're a natural communicator, Mari... you speak the language of love that EVERYONE can understand! Bless you, you're an absolute STAR!! TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Oh, the simple joys of grandchildren... great write|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|This put a big, BIG smile on my face.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
"Flawless Love" - perfect poetic write ... outstanding!!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|isn't love great?
enjoyed your piece
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Ha, I can just see the smile on your face, Mari, you were given a gift, a reason for being, for loving and feeling and thinking and surviving, for being a flawed human who begot -- this 'boy'. :)
For me, it's girls, two under fourteen, no fives allowed, please. Tough years, from birth to upper-age...
You brought a smile, and a lesson, and a hug of life into view with steady, short succinctness, balanced with loving humor, and maybe even irony, to this reader's reality-slaught mind of adulthood.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|So that's why I dreamed last night about changing tires on race cars! Now that's a powerful poem:-)|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Love is all, Mari!!! You've found a unique way of expressing it in your verses. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|awwwww so sweet, and love between a grandchild and the grandmother. Now that is love, when a small boy can say he loves beyond his toy cars. This is a very good, and sweet write Mari. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth,& ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Lol that certainly is Love...bless
|Reviewed by Patrick McCormick
|Very nicely put.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Oh that's so sweet. ;) Great!|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Awwwww ... this is so precious!
It's moments like these that last forever.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sounds like love to me, Mari!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Masterful exchange of mutual love of each other,|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Oh, yes, this IS Love! :0)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent comparative parallelism ...
you two naturally interact with each other ...
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|sounds like love to me
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Mari, this is the epitome of love! Brava!
Our greatest delight, grandchildren;-)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hehehehehe yip thats love for sure!!
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Precious! He's about 5 years old? Don't you love being a grandmother?!|