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Until You
by Sue Hess

Tuesday, April 12, 2005
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I stand corrected
I believed I was above all this
The pain and the longing
That I was too old
To play the game
Too savvy
To believe the lies
I thought no man could do this
Thrill me to my toes
And leave me breathless
Panting for more
But afraid to ask
I believed it couldn’t happen
Not to me
Until you

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Reviewed by The Smoking Poet 5/13/2005
Ah, we are never too old to be giddy again. Nice.
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 4/13/2005
this is encouraging!
Reviewed by andrea coltman 4/13/2005
Wonderfully passionate write, wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 4/13/2005
Sounds like you've found your soulmate!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 4/13/2005

An outstanding, heartfelt poetic write ... wonderful!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin 4/13/2005
Reborn! It's a great feeling, in more ways than one. Never too old to love.... :)
Reviewed by Dale Clark 4/13/2005
Very romantic and so passionate.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 4/13/2005
Nice one Sue, Tidy! (Yorkshire (English) slang, means good)lol.

Reviewed by D May (Reader) 4/13/2005
and damn when it pisses me off. : )
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/13/2005
Thrilling someone to their toes is marvelous!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/12/2005
sighhhhhh they say never say never....becauseyou never know what might come your way!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 4/12/2005
Aren't we men something else.
One is never to old, to play games.
Nice work
Reviewed by jude forese 4/12/2005
you never know when lightning will strike ... emotionally uplifting!
Reviewed by George Jackson 4/12/2005
Wonderful, Sue.
Reviewed by Henry Stevens 4/12/2005
Sue, excellent poem, tight compression, twists smooth, two word ending a zinger, and also the title. Henry
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 4/12/2005
All it takes is that "One" special guy, Sue. Thrilled you down to your toes? Yeah ... that's the "one!" ;) Great write ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/12/2005
Good, now enjoy it!;-)Lovely poem Sue!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/12/2005
Wow, Sue,

Much emotion in this powerpacked little gem. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Dave Harm 4/12/2005
Great write... Oh, the "joy" or "pain" of games...
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