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Romantic Thoughts (freestyle haiku)
by Carole Mathys
Thursday, April 14, 2005
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~ Romantic Thoughts ~



long cool nights

snuggling under the covers

like spoons




dark stormy night

a bright flash of lightning

outlining our bodies




satin sheets sliding off

sweat-moistened skin

in a shimmering puddle




fresh from the bath

firelight licking her skin

love after midnight




emerging from the pool

clothed in promises

dripping water and moonlight




untying two ribbons

silk whispered against skin

hair cascading down




April 15, 2005

by Carole Mathys



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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Beautiful imagery and feeling in your words--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by William Bonilla
I just can't get enough of your fantastic romantic haiku
thanks for sharing

William ......Peace & Love
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
beautifully expressed, Carole, as always...
Reviewed by jude forese
romantic moments superbly expressed in this wonderful haiku ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I love haiku. I love these "love" ones. Thank you for this romantic offering, Carole. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Beautifully Romantic Carole,beautiful imagery and a beautiful pic to match, excellent.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
nice imagery and use of metaphors; very well done, carole! love the picture too; pretty!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Fantastic metaphors, imagery, and verse ... absolutely breathtaking and stunning visual ... truly exceptional freestyle haiku!!

Blessings my friend,

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield
Wonderful! Your words take the reader along for a night of passion...
Great write
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Lovely romantic write!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
So very romantic. I just love the way you word everything.
Always so Unique, Eloquent and Beautiful.
Thank You so much Carole
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Carole, these are absolutely divine! I was picking the "satin sheets" as a favorite then read "firelight licking her skin" and gave up, they are all fantastic!;-)

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