|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|Brings me back to school field trips to science museums, nose pressed to the glass, wondering, wondering, trying to imagine those long ago days that brought us all to today.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|An outstanding poem that deserves to be in the 100 most treasured poems. Congratulations.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|You bring ancient history alive, Paul! The imagery is outstanding. I have arrowheads that are a million years old. My father found them near the river. You can hold them in your hand and literally feel time. Allthough they are valuable, I will never part with them. Thank you...|
|Reviewed by William Cryer
|Splendid visuals in this piece. It reads like a modern Milton--spewing with grandness.|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Magic is in the air! Love this write. Very well done, indeed!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Amazing write that stimulates ALL the senses--devine!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|Articulate and strong write...|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|This is a fantastic Poem
You have sculptured here
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|whilst nature listened
to the sound of the new found
exceptional lines Paul..good work!!
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Quite thoughtful and thought provoking write here, Sir Paul. Also skillful use of alliteration and onomatopoeia. You shaped the story well. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Excellent Poem of history, all the sounds and thoughts
Nature listened... and shivered.
Amazing poem! They were amazing people.
Thank You so much.
The picture is great and all the tools you show. Thank you
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Awesome write Paul. Vivid imagery. Your talent shows through.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the images are right on target ...|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|enjoyed the read|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul reaching in depth of meaning, Paul. Merci mon ami! Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|love this poem Paul, though have to say the picture's a little freaky to me. nice description and love the clack, clack, clack sound and your last sentence.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Outstanding work Paul! Metaphorical magic brings this to life!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|OOOOOOooooo!! This neatly takes the mind to places which, to my shame, I need to consider more often than I do. The Romans have always impressed, of course, with their sophistication, but this puts into perspective the "setting apart" of the mind of man for "higher things" right from the beginning... and look what we've done with it?! Yup - both sides of the coin, good and bad. I'm awed by this. And your treatment of the subject does it justice. You are both reliable witness, articulate commentator and poet, Paul... quite a staggering combination... is this the man who was berueing his lack of purpose just a few days' ago?!... :)) Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As Tinka says this is an exceptional write and brings us humbly back from the age of computer to the age of stone.. Well done.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most exceptional write...masterful yet again!!
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Talk about a powerful write! This one shoots straight through the heart and soul like an arrow of explosive unfolding prophecy. Truly exceptional.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|very good imagery. i enjoyed|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A stunning visual you paint with your words...I am keeping a copy of this to put with the splendid collection of arrow heads artifax|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Insightful and great desciptions.|
|Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
|GREAT! This was a great write. Wonderful imagery. :)