|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Your brother has penned a powerful poem.
The system is the system and it is sad.
I agree with Eileen.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb! Our judicial system is a disgrace, it's too corrupt for politicians to deal with, so they ignore it! Only a massive outpouring might help, but I doubt if anyone has the heart to bother.
Hope things improve on your end!
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well penned Melissa!!
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Powerful write Melissa...not knowing the vagracies of your legal system, I can't really comment, but I suspect it's as screwed up as ours...but your words speak volumes, more power to your pen this is excellent.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|tim is a talented writer as well, melissa; i can see where the talent lies!
very well done, tim; thanks for sharing this angry, powerful piece! very well done! and melissa: thanks for sharing your brother's talents with us!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Fritz Barnes
|Wow, the frustration and anger really comes through. Well done, Tim.
Very sorry to hear of your struggles. Hugs to you and your children, Melissa.