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As You Wonder Why I Won't Get Out Of Your Face...
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Friday, April 15, 2005
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IF YOU KNOW IT, YOU DON'T HAVE TO SHOW IT!

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_4-15-05 ( **REVISED RE-READ 4-17-05 )

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IT IS NOT HOW YOU MADE IT-IT IS HOW YOU,
I DID IT,i.e. THE ASPECTS OF IT ALL...

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FOR BENEFIT OF AD: No One Into Auto Tech
Nor Car Fanatic Dis-Believed My Direct
About Me -Web Page!I Haven't Revised It_

In Almost 6 Years On Web Only For 1 Big
Reason-Little Gremlin Hiding In Den,Brig
Him,ThinksHe SoSmart(Fart)Face,He Picks_

On Ladies,ThoseWeakWho Can't Defend Them
Selves,Afraid To Speak Out-Not Me, Bend
No Way You Cluck-I Read Junk You Write_

To You Think Delight-You Write 1st Grade
Mentality Known By Name You're Cute,Fade
Into Crack You Are Hiding-I Won't Even_

Elaborate-I Know You're Shitten In Your
Pants Readen This Write,Poem-My Delight_

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I KNOW:Many Know Little To Nothing About
Aspects Of Cars-"IT IS EXACTLY WHY"-You
Most ($Pay Heavy Car Payments$) You Do_

Drive Around In Expensive Beer Cans,AIR_
BAGS--NO FRAMES UNDER THEM--Air(In Head)
You Wonder WHY YOU END UP DEAD IN BED_

Casket,In That Grave TRIEN TO SAVE GAS_

WHY:**G M Put"Chevy Cheap Engines"In All
Olds,Pontiac,Cadillac,Buick,Chevy-**Fall
1980-THEY COMBINED DIVISIONS SAVE MONEY_

STARTED:PULL FRAMES OUT-UNITIZED BODIES_

STOPPED:MAKEN OLDSMOBILES--NOW EXTINCT_

HEY: PARK THAT CAR OR TRUCK- $WATCH GAS
PRICE$ Come Down To Ground! On Your Ass
You Sit Complainen About It-Never Doing_

Anything About It,Just Bitch,Bitch,Bitch
Keep On Payen $Price$! I Can Go On Stich
Your Ass To Cross ALREADY Have I, TRASK!

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PHOTO/ARTWORK:Speaks For Itself-I Do Not
HaveTo Prove Anything To You,Anybody,Not
Even(God)I Was There,I Did It,I Made It_

Happen, I Did Something You Assholes Be
It Will Never Do--I Paid $300.00 For See
Photo Used 49 Olds,Turned It Into DREAM_

ThatMy*Wealthy SHIT 2 FACED School Mates
Wish They'd Been Friends With Me,States
Fact(There Girlfriends)In My Dream Car_

Used 1949 OLDS--I Can Still See Cloaked
In There Faces --As She Got In--I SMOKED
MY TIRES In There(Daddys Cadillac)Faces_

With All You High School College Clicks,
All Those Who(They) Can't Believe,Dicks,
There Chicks Went Out With Me, TRASK,I_

They Got Made Did It In My BAD ASS OLDS!

Never, No Peace Of Mind, c 2005 TRASK

Me, TRASK "POETIC PROPHET"...

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PHOTO/ARTWORK AGAIN SPEAKS FOR ISTSELF!

THOSE OF YOU:**Who Do Not Know What,Like
Recall What a Stock 49 Olds Looked Like,
This Is/Was My CUSTOMIZED THEN Version!
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*ACQUAINTENCES:

*While All Those*Acquaintences Out There
Are Figguren A Way Out To Screw You,Fair
Like My Little Children's Black Panther_

I Lie In (Wait)Silence Awaiting You All
Who Screwed Me,TRASK To Do 1 Thing,Call
---TO COLLECT...

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IF YOU DON'T KNOW IT--YOU JUST BLOW IT
SMOKE OUTA YOUR ASS--IN YOUR FACE...

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*FOR AND ON THE RECORD:

OLDS (Was).....1st OHV V-8 1948
Cadillac*........................V-8 1949
Chevy............................V-8 1955
Pontiac..........................V-8 1956
Buick.............................V-8 1957

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*CADILLAC Practically Sued Oldsmobile In
Courts In 1948/49 To Get The Rights(Sin)
To OLDS EXCLUSIVE (OHV) Over Head Valve_

V-8 Engine-Yet Today Chevy(Cheap)Engines
Take CREDIT For It All,i.e.Even Engines
Play GREEDY POLITICS At General Motors_

All In Name Of GREED & CHEAP LABOR!Sell
It For More,Make Cheaper For Less,Well
G.M.C.Is Now Thinken Dumpen Either of 2_

BUICK Or PONTIAC Will Soon Be Gone! Me,
TRASK,I Love Old Cars-They Worked,Be
I Always Said I Do Have Last Laugh_

Even On You General Motors Corporation!

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MORE FROM G M C YOU CAN BELIEVE IT TOO :

**2005 CORVETTE 350 V-8 SMOGGED PLASTIC
PIECE SHIT(FORD T BIRD-VIPER)SO DRASTIC
LOOKS LIKE MITSA-BEASTIE REAR ENDED BY_

ILLEGAL L A MEXICANOS GARBAGE TRUCK,SIGH
NICKEL N DIME - IT SUCK'S BIG TIME...

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** LAST OF OLDS BITCHEN 455 ENGINES:

CUTLASS,1973,2 dr,455c.i.V-8 4bbl Carb_

**G M Dumped Start 1973 Phased Out 1978
In Lieu Of Combined CHEAP CHEVY ENGINES
In Fact I Owned(Now X-Girl F Has) Came_

With Factory 4bbl Dual Exhaust,HD 3 spd
OilCooled Hydro,3:73 Posi Rear End,Need
Change To Holley 850 cfm 4bbl Carb,And_

Electronic Ignition-I Did Tow My 54 Olds
With Extra Engine Parts,Cyl Heads,Olds
Parts To CA From PA --Engine Produced _

Such Phenominal Horse Power At Speeds At
Over 100 mph Mid a.m. Thru Needles,That
I Made It To Granada Hills Less 3 Days_

X-G.F.Her Father Tried To Confiscate My
73 Olds C.From Her-Fear She'd Kill(Deny)
Herself Because Of Power-She Leave His_

House "SMOKEN TIRES" Up BuenaVista Blvd!

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*YOU HAVE ALL BEEN HAD DONE IN SMOGGED:

FORD,CHRYSLER,DODGE,JAG,MERCEDES,TOYOTA,
NISSAN-ALL FOREIGN CARS FOLLOWED(YOKE-A)
IN SUIT-$THEY SAVE TRILLION$-NOT ONE OF_

PLASTIC PIECES OFSHIT-HAVE UNDER(FRAMES)
THEM-BEER CANS ON WHEELS BE (MIND GAMES)
THERE$GREED$DEATH-AIR BAGS-IN YOUR FACE!

*YOU PAY $50,000 To $150,000 Each Car +
DMV Registration,License Plates Fees +
Excise Taxes + State Sales Taxes +
Drivers License Fees + Gasolines Fed +
State Sales Taxes + Car Insurance +
ON TOP OF IT ALL YOU ASSHOLES_

YOUR F--KING ASS IS NAILED TO CROSS...

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*CONSPIRACY OIL ($3 GALLON GASOLINE) IS:

FORMED BY EPA BIG BROTHER-NOW IN CONTROL
AT BAY, EL PRESIDENTE BUSH (FOOLED)HOLE
IN YOUR BRAIN (INSANE IN MEMBRANE) HE-

EL PRESIDENTE BUSH-IS PULLEN ALL OF YOUR

STRINGS--IN YOUR FACE!

*CONCENTRATION CAMPS(FEDERAL PRISONS)ON
2004's TRULY ARE STARING YOU RIGHT ON
-IN YOUR FACE...

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/6/2005
Trask! 25 words or less! My head is ringing!
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/4/2005
Old cars rock, TRASK!
Life is not
a popularity contest,
is it?
~~Nordette
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 5/3/2005
power under the hood
behind the wheel
in front of computer

stay in their face
Out cold info.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 4/20/2005
Trask, MOre Power to you... Started from Scratch and still tearing up the roads! Sounds too good 2 B true, that car is still alive and kicking. Awesome Read and I agree, Old cars are still a thing of beauty and strength. Rock on! :) (((HuGs-Lady,Sheee))) Thank you for being in my face,I find you interesting to read and understand.YOu have a way of Opening my Eyes/Mind and Heart,even wider.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 4/16/2005
TRASK,

Agree! Agree! Agree!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds 4/16/2005
TRASK, you're right, of course. Love those old cars, too.

Gina
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg 4/16/2005
That car is freakin beautiful.....I am restoring a 65 mustang..Gotta say this for you..You don't mince words..haha love it!!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/16/2005
Okay this is a true Trask Gem!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/15/2005
Okay, TRASK. Cars!!! I used to be "into" them. Ain't there no more but I can still appreciate what you're saying here. Thanks. Love and peace to you. Your friend from BC, Canada. Regis
Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau 4/15/2005
you are, beyond a doubt, one of the most confrontational, button pushing, bird flipping, window smashing, kiss my a**, bite on this, nasty rock'n'roll motherf*ckers on this site......never change.
-A.
Reviewed by jude forese 4/15/2005
i bet you my Buick 68 GS 455 could kick its ass! ;)
Reviewed by Linda Hill 4/15/2005
My dear friend, BEAUTIFUL car and built much better than today's models. You have something to be proud of! EXCELLENT write too as always!

Your true friend, ~Linda
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 4/15/2005
TRASK:

Beautiful car! You are right about old cars and new cars. Old cars are built a lot more sturdier, while the new ones do not protect us on the road, only works to take us somewhere we wanted to go.

It's a matter of economy, everything has gotten economized. It is not like it's an art anymore.

That is why I prefer old cars better than the new. I'm glad you feel that way too.

Wonderful write!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/15/2005
TRASK,

A beautiful car. I think it is all the more special because you worked for it--it wasn't given to you, like so many of today's items. And I agree with you 1,000 per cent--older cars were much better made, these new things? Pshaw! My favorite car (that I don't have anymore, unfortunately) was a 1976 Olds Omega--when I got it, I hated it--too big--when I got rear ended by a woman doing 55, and the only damage was a bumper that got knocked off and my re-view mirror fell off, from that moment on, I loved that car! LOL Her car, an 86 Chevy Celebrity, looked like an accordian LOL

Keep working for your dreams, and keep writing--I'll always read you, even if I don't always agree. :) I appreciate your honesty and most of all, you taking the time to read my words!

(((HUGS))) and love, your friend, Karla. :)
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