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Gravitational Pull
by Kate Burnside
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GRAVITATIONAL PULL


Sleep fades, seeps uncurling
like the spreading fingers
of an unclenched dawn.

The deadening fist
in which I'm held
loosens its protection,
takes aim with fresh projection,

Propels me towards the arc of the sun;
Shoots me like the stars of a gun.
I become

the semi-eclipse
of the Face of Fire
by gravitational pull
of thought's desire;

the smile that appears
on the curve of his lips;
a satellite orbiting round his hips.
Ellipse

of the Midnight Sun.

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Reviewed by M. B.
Kate, this is absolutely mind blowing!!
You just can't keep doing this to me.
I NEED my mind!

Truly truly terrific!

~ Mari
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Kate,

Great imagery and energetics in this write!
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Good Grief, K-K-K-Kate! Yep, you've even stuttered my thoughts here. The first verse, alone, caused me pause and ever the indulging self that I am, I just pondered and gazed at that awhile... then dessert! The rest of this metaphorical wonder embedded itself in my mind... BUT... since I am subject to "senior moments" now and then, I will clear an entire shelf in my library for this fantastic festival of writing. It's my new favorite, to say the least... probably until you write another one. Sigh... You must believe me when I tell you that this poem sits all by itself in my admiration room.

God, you're good! katy xoxoxox <--- (extras)!
Reviewed by George Jackson
Excellent!
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Exceptional, Kate!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
"like the spreading fingers - really like this line!
of an unclenched dawn"

This poem certainly has a "Gravitational Pull".

Blessings,
Joseph
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Take me for a ride, Kate. Wow. Reading this, I feel as though I am flying through the cosmos. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese
i like poetry that mixes sensuous and stellar imagery ... in this case, overtly resulting in your desired affect ...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Katie:

You are a true poet!!!!! I like the choice of words you often use in your poems, they're so interesting and so creative!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Ditto Eileen's comments.
Reviewed by Michelle Mills
The imagery is so amazingly skilled. I love this piece. Michelle
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Stunning imagery Kate!Instead of taking classes
you will be teaching them! Kudo's!

Eileen
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Amazes me where your wonderful and energetic ideas keep cropping up from, if you have a secret book can you pass some on to me.lol Seriously great poem Kate as always.

Felix
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Simply beautiful
Peter
Reviewed by George Carroll
This poem is out of this world; I like the way you used outer space as part of wonderful and unique usage of words for descriptive purposes. Well done.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Kate,

Beautiful imagery in your words, unique format and rhyming sceme; a winner! I especially love the introductory stanza--so peaceful!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
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