|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Very uplifting and thinkable poem, with true thoughts coming at me. Peace to all.|
|Reviewed by Robert Martin
|What a spiritual uplifting beautiful piece this is, well done!
Here in the lightning here in the thunder
Here in the cosmic and the chaotic
In the familiar and the exotic
At the still point I watch and I wonder...
Hybrid of an unusual kind
The cut of my hair is monastic
The cut of my features dynastic
Lacking a brain yet having a mind
All my own as alone on the earth
At the still point I sojourn to birth
I especially loved this, very powerful imagery
|Reviewed by Peter Gardner
|The world is truly mad, and you see it starkly and write it elegantly. I find it really interesting that you think of yourself as mind, a truly spiritual perspective. Keep writing, and much peace, Peter|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Spiritually uplifting. Thank you, Stevie. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Thoughtful and insightful write full of the promise of life and things to come.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A poem with spiritual muscle to spare! More than a great read, for those with eyes and ears and soul to see and hear and feel, you offer a beautiful mantra for this war-torn disease-ridden and fear-corrupted era that is too often anything but (dare I say it) beautiful. Enjoyed this tremendously.|