by Tova Gabrielle
Saturday, April 16, 2005
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The stakes are huge!
Save the World,
Go back to Earth
and get your PHD
Fight fleshy demons,
Become an ace dragon slayer
Get your medals
when you return
If it doesn't kill you first,
it will make you strong.
Choose your role: Victim-who-dies or
choose your adventure
A fantastic chance to win points
if you have the chutzpa to figure this one out!
Not for the faint of heart!
delusionals will be put on a wait list,
we sent too many already and
the game is HOT.
All who completed last tenure, considered for top jobs.
*Benefits not applicable to Suicides
who will be subject to different rules
including but not limited to
being placed on a waiting list
while in a gray fog,
THE BACKUP WORLD OPTION
waking up on another earth
exactly like this one
with the same damn people and places,
a backup world.
becoming just a face a
nd nothing else,
floating in space throughout eternity.
THE KICK BACK
being returned immediately,
to whereyou last left off,
but as a ghost
(At the very least, if you don't stay in the Earth School
to get your damn diploma)
you will have to go through birth again,
and trying to grow up in a culture that doesn't protect or respect childhood,
and all this just to reach the stage
you were at before you dropped out.
You'd still have to figure out
what to do with the life force,
since you can't get rid of energy
You canít stop existence
and I donít want to be a ghost
No I wouldnít mind dropping out
of this life early, are you kidding?
I'd get to see Timmy and Clyde Cockatoo again and get together with
those humans who left me (the bastards!)
I wouldn't mind flying around
exempt from the gravity of gravity
where i spend all my time trying to make things i find undertsandable, understood,
and understanding things i find incomprehensible
but squander the body?
can't just rush
after killing yourself, can you?
in fact, oyou might crash and
what it would be like to crash
with no body?
Would you be a dark indentation somewhere in space
or a shadow on the bathroom floor?
Besides, Dad's Visitations were proof enough that
even if you die , you don't die,
even if you commit suicide,
you donít die,
and suicide can be a long term thing, including living a yo-yo lifestyle.
You might wish you could die,
once you were dead.
No I will not die now, like my father at 50
and dear sister, at 47,
although i'd like to
of this world
but since there is no death,
i'll end up out of sinc,
wacked out and miserable
without a body
to fix my life
if you leave the stage early
without an invitation
to the reception
or at least calling first
and making sure
over there are ready for you,
barging into the next world
you might end up in another place
but not in your mind,
which you'd bring with you to
another place where
you donít get to right your wrongs
without going back to kindergarten
starting all over again.
and who wants to go through another birth and diapers
it might be wise to stay here and
finish your sentences.
waiting for a slot on earth
and I don't imagine you'd be high
on their list of applicants.
if you step out of the
flow of life, at the very least, you will be out of the flow. And that can't be good.
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|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I am applauding, this is truly excellent! Unique, waaaay out of the box, and presented from a place that goes beyond the scope!
This should be sent out to the hospitals, schools, etc. This is
a work to be very proud of!
|Reviewed by Kenny Baez
|hey, you're asking all the right questions and phrasing them so well. I really enjoyed this meaning of life and death poem. You took me on a journey, Tova!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Now this is unique! hahahahaha!!! Thanks for your "poem from a poem"
I really enjoyed it, and the compliment!