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  Dream Scene (i) ... the Salacious Creature
by jude forese
Sunday, April 17, 2005
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In my dream I was strolling along the shoreline
Where I could see a faint figure in the distance
Walking on the water
Splashing across my mind

It approached slowly
Rippling through surges of heat
Rising into the air
Like a mirage
Appearing and evaporating
In the fine mist embracing the tide

At first, it appeared to be clad in a dark robe
Unanimated and foreboding
But as I looked up to the sun and back to shore
The robe was white and rippling in the wind

In a graceful stride
It approached closer

Removing its cloak
She transformed into a salacious creature
With beautiful, sparkling wings radiating from her naked form

She then pointed in a seductive manner
Moaning in a wide range of octaves
Like the sirens of Scylla

Over her was a white dove
Landing between us on the sand

I pressed her smooth skin against mine
And awoke suddenly
With the smell of the sea upon my skin



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Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
i like those kind of dreams
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Why can't I dream like that? Isn't salacious bad? I checked, just sexy, and that ain't bad.

Ron
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Rebirth. Transformation. Destiny fulfilled. Baptism into yourself. I think that you sort of like the person you are becoming. This is good...
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Very nice! I especially liked the last stanza!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
I Wake Up From My Dream With The Smell Of Her Long Clean Black Hair In My Face,Her Tear's On My Face, Her Hand Still Not Letting Go Of Mine_

Look Beyond That Smell Of Sea(White Dove) YOU WILL SEE(In Reality) YOUR TRUE LOVE...

TRASK
Reviewed by Dave Harm
Oh another "what if?" question... what if dreams were true...
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Such a beautiful dream! Outstanding.
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
sensual dream and write...Hey, where oh where is Mr Sher??
Reviewed by William Bonilla
thanks for a wonderful journey
into your dream

William .....Peace
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
feeling swept away...
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
hated to wake up, Robert. Some dreams seem so real. I hate to wake up before a good dream is finished. G
Reviewed by Sue Hess
what a wonderful dream...or was it
Reviewed by June Thompson
breathtaking to say the least

I hope this comes back to you or better yet stays with you and we are so fortunate to hear of the after glow of bliss
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Enchanting write!
Reviewed by A PAX
oh my goodness! lol
pax A
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
i like this
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Sounds like you met Dana, the Irish mother Goddess, who came from the sea bringing law, learning, healing and the creative arts to these islands on the western fringe of Europe (search Tuatha de Danaans for more info.)
I always enjoy a good Goddess poem and I like the way some images in this appear to lead to a conventional conclusion but then take us deeper into the more ancient mysteries.
best
Ian
Reviewed by M. B.
I love that ending.

DREAM SCENE is a sensual psychedelic mind journey. One I wouldn't mind hitching a ride on.

~ Mari
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
I bet that was one dream you did not want to wake up from so soon :-) It would appear you saw beyond your fears to the true light that was surrounding her :-) Excellent conception.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Ah, so it was a wet dream! LOL

Sounds like you woke up too soon.

Blessings,
Joseph
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Sounds to me like old Mom Ocean materialized into human form to lament about how man treats her...Ed
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations
Salacious within purity in closeness... from unanimated and foreboding in the distance. What a wonderful evolution within a fabulous dream!
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Lovely, sensous, yearning dream. You have nice dreams. ~ sara
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
You have the best dreams. Take me with you sometime. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by George Carroll
It wasn't a dream, she just put you in a trance.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Woooooo this is good very good!!

Lost in an ocean dream can only be good!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Now this is a true work of fantasia passion worthy of your name Robert. I was holding my breathe on every line and hope you do a follow up to this one.

Felix
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
the job seems unfinished and that is good for your bed-sheet. smile.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... I suppose I come to this this morning through the filter of my own thoughts about embracing death with the white flag of a kiss; this "angelic visitation" you write about here helps me to process, yet again, thoughts about making our peace with the life/death continuum; how spiritual, creative and personal progression is an evolving integration of both and how not to fear the dark or the deep waters - but rather to embrace them. On a different tack, your creature's seductive moaning reminds me of my first antenatal classes, in which the midwife enlightened us that the noises a woman makes during childbirth are not dissimilar to those involuntary groans breathed during the act of love-making... "How appropriate!", I thought!! :)) Dream on, Jude. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
how romantic, the briny depths :)
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Jude,

You brought me right into the poem with you!
This is gorgeous!
Reviewed by A. Keith Barton
That which is forbidden becomes addictive; if we don't take the leap of faith we miss much of life and your words eloquently allude to this fact. Nice write.
Reviewed by Aberjhani
Aren't visits from angels nice? Sweet indeed.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Sounds divine! Seem strange how heavenly creatures can be so passionate, until we realize,it was Creator who made us that way ;-)!

Eileen
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
That dream ended just a little too abruptly...I hate when that happens. Perhaps you can pick it up again another time. The evolving image gives a surreal quality to this poem that both captivated and enchanted me. It was with a small sorrowful sigh that I read the last words. Your poem left me feeling like I just finished reading a mystery novel and in the end found out someone had torn out the last chapter. Wonderful write, Robert.
Take care,
Sherry
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