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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/20/2005 |
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| i like those kind of dreams |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/9/2005 |
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Why can't I dream like that? Isn't salacious bad? I checked, just sexy, and that ain't bad.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/24/2005 |
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| Rebirth. Transformation. Destiny fulfilled. Baptism into yourself. I think that you sort of like the person you are becoming. This is good... |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
4/20/2005 |
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| Very nice! I especially liked the last stanza! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/19/2005 |
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I Wake Up From My Dream With The Smell Of Her Long Clean Black Hair In My Face,Her Tear's On My Face, Her Hand Still Not Letting Go Of Mine_
Look Beyond That Smell Of Sea(White Dove) YOU WILL SEE(In Reality) YOUR TRUE LOVE...
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
4/19/2005 |
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| Oh another "what if?" question... what if dreams were true... |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
4/19/2005 |
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| Such a beautiful dream! Outstanding. |
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| Reviewed by Robin Labenberg |
4/19/2005 |
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| sensual dream and write...Hey, where oh where is Mr Sher?? |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/19/2005 |
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thanks for a wonderful journey
into your dream
William .....Peace |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
4/19/2005 |
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| feeling swept away... |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/18/2005 |
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| hated to wake up, Robert. Some dreams seem so real. I hate to wake up before a good dream is finished. G |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
4/18/2005 |
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| what a wonderful dream...or was it |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
4/18/2005 |
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breathtaking to say the least
I hope this comes back to you or better yet stays with you and we are so fortunate to hear of the after glow of bliss |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/18/2005 |
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| Enchanting write! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/18/2005 |
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oh my goodness! lol
pax A |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
4/18/2005 |
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| i like this |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
4/18/2005 |
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Sounds like you met Dana, the Irish mother Goddess, who came from the sea bringing law, learning, healing and the creative arts to these islands on the western fringe of Europe (search Tuatha de Danaans for more info.)
I always enjoy a good Goddess poem and I like the way some images in this appear to lead to a conventional conclusion but then take us deeper into the more ancient mysteries.
best
Ian |
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| Reviewed by M. B. |
4/18/2005 |
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I love that ending.
DREAM SCENE is a sensual psychedelic mind journey. One I wouldn't mind hitching a ride on.
~ Mari |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/18/2005 |
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| I bet that was one dream you did not want to wake up from so soon :-) It would appear you saw beyond your fears to the true light that was surrounding her :-) Excellent conception. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/18/2005 |
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Ah, so it was a wet dream! LOL
Sounds like you woke up too soon.
Blessings,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/18/2005 |
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| Sounds to me like old Mom Ocean materialized into human form to lament about how man treats her...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
4/18/2005 |
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Salacious within purity in closeness... from unanimated and foreboding in the distance. What a wonderful evolution within a fabulous dream!
Love&Light*
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
4/18/2005 |
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| Lovely, sensous, yearning dream. You have nice dreams. ~ sara |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
4/18/2005 |
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| You have the best dreams. Take me with you sometime. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/18/2005 |
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| It wasn't a dream, she just put you in a trance. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/18/2005 |
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Woooooo this is good very good!!
Lost in an ocean dream can only be good!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/18/2005 |
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Now this is a true work of fantasia passion worthy of your name Robert. I was holding my breathe on every line and hope you do a follow up to this one.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/18/2005 |
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| the job seems unfinished and that is good for your bed-sheet. smile. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/18/2005 |
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| ... I suppose I come to this this morning through the filter of my own thoughts about embracing death with the white flag of a kiss; this "angelic visitation" you write about here helps me to process, yet again, thoughts about making our peace with the life/death continuum; how spiritual, creative and personal progression is an evolving integration of both and how not to fear the dark or the deep waters - but rather to embrace them. On a different tack, your creature's seductive moaning reminds me of my first antenatal classes, in which the midwife enlightened us that the noises a woman makes during childbirth are not dissimilar to those involuntary groans breathed during the act of love-making... "How appropriate!", I thought!! :)) Dream on, Jude. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) |
4/18/2005 |
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| how romantic, the briny depths :) |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
4/17/2005 |
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Jude,
You brought me right into the poem with you!
This is gorgeous! |
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| Reviewed by A. Keith Barton |
4/17/2005 |
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| That which is forbidden becomes addictive; if we don't take the leap of faith we miss much of life and your words eloquently allude to this fact. Nice write. |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
4/17/2005 |
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| Aren't visits from angels nice? Sweet indeed. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/17/2005 |
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Sounds divine! Seem strange how heavenly creatures can be so passionate, until we realize,it was Creator who made us that way ;-)!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/17/2005 |
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That dream ended just a little too abruptly...I hate when that happens. Perhaps you can pick it up again another time. The evolving image gives a surreal quality to this poem that both captivated and enchanted me. It was with a small sorrowful sigh that I read the last words. Your poem left me feeling like I just finished reading a mystery novel and in the end found out someone had torn out the last chapter. Wonderful write, Robert.
Take care,
Sherry
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