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  Interruptus Motorhead
by Paul Williams
Tuesday, April 19, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Listening to music whilst writing can have it's drawbacks lol


‘Interruptus Motorhead’

 

Ah! the tunes are soothing…

Pleasing orchestral ambience in which to compose

verse of profound love…

So relaxed am I, I slip easily into metaphor, in fact I

may even include a dove.

 

Where are you?

The one candle left to burn before

eternal darkness comes

 

Oh yes! I can see where this is going

with all this beautiful music flowing.

 

Where are you?

Elusive flame that ignites hope

in fractured hearts

 

This melodious magic

is so soothing my pen is dancing on the

edge of tragic

 

Where are you?

Light of desire who flickers like

an elusive dream

 

“Turn the bass up” roared Lemmy

ARRRAAGGHH!

a cacophony of molten metal wrought

from thunderous virtue…interrupts

 

Where are you?

Tear me open and look for


what’s lost inside


 

a train of thought buggered

a poem shattered, words and thoughts hide

from a music less sugared.

 

Thanks to Motorhead, I forgot what it was I wanted to say

but I think it was along the lines of…

 

like a candle I watch

you melt away

 

so thanks to Motorhead it’s not a poem and it’s not prose

I may as well sit here and pick my nose.

 

Paul Williams © 2005

 
 




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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Well I love it!! The candle of hope I like that and the last line... perfection!!! ***** 5 stars for the whole kit n kaboodle that your mind the music and your pen poured out!! I truly loved from word one to the last one. (c :)
Thanks so much Paul xoox
Tracey
Reviewed by Aberjhani
An extraordinary journey through the life of a powerful creative moment brutalized by the less sensitive among us. These are finely nuanced lines that capture the very essence and delicate passion of the creative impulse. Beauty greets the beast with a forgiving heart and a gentle sense of humor:-)
Aberjhani
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Paul, you must be a riot in real life if you can come off this funny and natural on a page.
Reviewed by L. Figgins
You disguise those achingly beautiful lines of longing in between verses about Motorhead. The juxtaposition makes them even more poignant. I laughed nevertheless. I'm glad that we can laugh through the pain...xox
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Hee, hee, glad I'm not the only nose picker..
Music is ok, but it can get me off track..
Love the humor....
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
I grinned from beginning and almost to end, then I chuckled. I loved it, Paul. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Thank you for sharing your humorous side. It is therapeutic for many, Paul. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Sue Hess
i loved this...absolutely loved it...i was getting a bit tired of romantic and this just grabbed me and said 'how about this'
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
LOL, Paul...I hate it when my inspiration leaves before the poem is finished. I call it "clarity that fades to indifference." You have written the moment well.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Dave Harm
LOL... Where are you? You can't hide from the finger...
Reviewed by A PAX
LOL
Well both actions get results Paul, nose picking and prose writing. Except I think that the later produces a more permenent result, even if the first is a needed temporary fix. But either way something inside.....comes out....and when we got the blues.....
they need an outlet...
Enjoyed this tons!

LOL thank you for the unexpected smile, I am delighted.......pax Anita
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Paul,

LOL--poetus interruptus! LOVE IT

Clever, creative you--fantastic write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Paul,

Poetic excellence is clearly defined in this outstanding write ... superb!!

Blessings,

Robert
Reviewed by jude forese
next time try listening to Eastern Awakening's "Buddha Chillout" may give you some food for thought besides those boggers ;)

cool humor at its best ...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Be sure to use your pinky finger, it gets further in to the thicker boogers...they have more taste and more meat...Ed
Reviewed by E T Waldron
LOL!!!I always write with music, but I turn it off if it doesn't suit the mood of the poem;-) This is a fantastic write so be thankful to Motorhead, and please no picking your nose;-)!Love the humor!

eileen
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Nah... I just laughed myself soxless at this, Paul... this has got to be Brithumour!! Ah yes!! The poetic sublime torpedoed by some heavy metal, or, in my case, belting Matchbox 20 (bit more intelligent and refined, but STILL belting at times!! - don't hit me!!) Bet you play pretty mean air-guitar, huh?! Yeah, let's forget all this poetry lark and just meet up for a bit of thrash... :)) LOL Kate aka Kuatro (Susie)(showing me age...) LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Lol...I found I MUST have silence to write...otherwise who knows what would come out...although some may think it's better than my usual anyway...lol
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Hey you may pick your nose...but...hmmmm....maybe meditation will give that head a good "backup" start!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wow this is defiantely not your every day hum drum write. Well done.
Felix
Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Prose/nose.....as long as you keep writing and trying....smile. Henry
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Dear Paul,
Even when motorhead interrupts your thoughts, you produce art. This is abstract but it is powerful nevertheless. The words 'like a candle, I watch you melt away' went deep. I find them achingly sad. In my heart I'd like to believe that nobody you love ever truly fades away but remains within, an everlasting light.
I wish I could contribute something more meaningful but for once I am at a loss for words...
Love Chanti
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