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Inner Smile
by Kate Burnside
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INNER SMILE


Walking on the still-wet sand,
ribbed and ridged
from pound and pull
of foaming tides -

Like roof of mouth
explored by tongue,

grooves of moist cavern
that draw you in
with secret smile;

that cleave to bone
with grit of teeth;

that hold and won't let go...


A tiny wave nibbled
the bare toe I offered;
suckled like newborn
at the breast;

I laughed

secretly

enjoying

the Inner Smile.

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Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Dear Kate,
I'm in awe of your originality. The comparison between the ridges of the sand and the roof of ones mouth is a touch of genius. You've got a lot of people smiling here, incuding me. My smile is filled with admiration. You truly are gifted precious lady.
Love Chanti
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Kate,

Poetess magnifique! Poetic excellence abounds in "Inner Smile!"" Loved this and all your poetry!!

Blessings,

Robert
Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
This one is a stunner! I can feel every word of it.

Emeka
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Kate,

This is a very beautiful and sensual write! You have
captured the inner world magically!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
When there is a glow within
it can't help but show without.

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Helen Downey
Well written with great choice of words and imagery. I love walking along the sea shore with all that it has to offer.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations
Oh, this is amazing, exceptional poetry! Absolutely love the tiny wave image. Thank you, Kate.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by jude forese
Kate, this is an exceptional atmospheric poem smiling from within its own wonderful lucidity ...
Reviewed by A PAX
lol
this just got me..........my kind of line

Like roof of mouth
explored by tongue,

such a private location, and unplanned movement......just like your sea :)
Intelligent and witty Kate..........and so YOU
pax A :)



Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
your inner smile gave me a great, big outer one... wonderful
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
Lovely, lovely, lovely, Kate. It is that inner smile that seems to be our best friend sometimes; never an argument, just total and complete understanding.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Oooooh...Nice!!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Exquisite rendering Kate, you sure have learned to
keep it lean and lucid,a masterful trait, very few
can accomplish and maintain their own style;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Kate,

There you go, taking us on magical journeys with the beautiful currents of your words...this is absolutely gorgeous! I have a big smile on my face right now--and I thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by George Carroll
How many times I have felt that sensation while walking on the beach with my wife, Florence. Elegant poem
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Simply Beautiful, I have a very big inner grin now...

A tiny wave nibbled
the bare toe I offered,
suckled like newborn
at the brest;

love it! Oh I play a mean guitar by the way, never mind air guitar, been in three bands...'let me see that dandruff' (makes horns with hand rocks until green in face lol)

Paul;-] Head going ten-to-the-dozen
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