|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
I'm in awe of your originality. The comparison between the ridges of the sand and the roof of ones mouth is a touch of genius. You've got a lot of people smiling here, incuding me. My smile is filled with admiration. You truly are gifted precious lady.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Poetess magnifique! Poetic excellence abounds in "Inner Smile!"" Loved this and all your poetry!!
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|This one is a stunner! I can feel every word of it.
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This is a very beautiful and sensual write! You have
captured the inner world magically!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|When there is a glow within
it can't help but show without.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Helen Downey
|Well written with great choice of words and imagery. I love walking along the sea shore with all that it has to offer.|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Oh, this is amazing, exceptional poetry! Absolutely love the tiny wave image. Thank you, Kate.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Kate, this is an exceptional atmospheric poem smiling from within its own wonderful lucidity ...|
|Reviewed by A PAX
this just got me..........my kind of line
Like roof of mouth
explored by tongue,
such a private location, and unplanned movement......just like your sea :)
Intelligent and witty Kate..........and so YOU
pax A :)
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|your inner smile gave me a great, big outer one... wonderful|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Lovely, lovely, lovely, Kate. It is that inner smile that seems to be our best friend sometimes; never an argument, just total and complete understanding.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Exquisite rendering Kate, you sure have learned to
keep it lean and lucid,a masterful trait, very few
can accomplish and maintain their own style;-)
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
There you go, taking us on magical journeys with the beautiful currents of your words...this is absolutely gorgeous! I have a big smile on my face right now--and I thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|How many times I have felt that sensation while walking on the beach with my wife, Florence. Elegant poem|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Simply Beautiful, I have a very big inner grin now...
A tiny wave nibbled
the bare toe I offered,
suckled like newborn
at the brest;
love it! Oh I play a mean guitar by the way, never mind air guitar, been in three bands...'let me see that dandruff' (makes horns with hand rocks until green in face lol)
Paul;-] Head going ten-to-the-dozen