|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Bless you Sue for having the strength...excellent write.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|Good for you for having such strength.
It's from this point that you can be confident
as you forge new paths to your dreams.
May your journey be filled with Light and Love.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|No ciggies...no rum...not even a plum to boost my muse...but heck here I am reviewing and not my life for a chance...lol!!
Thanks for sharing Sue!!
Keep that bottle unopen....or you might need a "Hangover" pill...that and any thrill I believe!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I never smoked, but the rum...? Man that would be rough to have that staring me in the face...though I try to remember the feeling I would have the next day...gawd how I hated hangovers...Thanks for the boost...Ed|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|good move ... i think i would have faltered ...|
|Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
|this was a great read, but i have to admit, i chuckled to myself, picturing you arguing with yourself, like rehearsing for an argument with a lover, about ripping open those smokes and puffing away like a dragon with tourette's syndrome. don't ask....
respect and miles of admiration,
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Sue, there's something really freeing and BIG about this poem, even more so about the choices you've made. Thanks for sharing them here. You've got me thinking..|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I agree that this is indeed very good wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Good poem, good wisdom. Henry|
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
|excellent write. you expressed feelings & thoughts i, too, am so very familiar with. well said. well read.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I don't know Sue this is a write that says a lot but I think also hides a lot. I quit smoking 4 years ago but I would not torment myself by sitting with a pack of cigarettes in front of me without wanting to cause myself a measure of pain, the same with the rum. If you are testing your endurance I think a lover may still be your better bet, harder on your heart but easier on your health.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Always forge ahead. What's past is past, keep looking forward. I agree, dream big dreams and make them come true. :)
An excellent, reflective, thought provoking piece--thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|We are alive when we keep life as a forward motion, Sue. Whatever is behind us is dyed in the wool, we can do nothing to change it. The future is new and we have the ability to shape it into anything we honestly desire. Dream big dreams and then make them happen. You have penned a wonderful message here for all of us.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|all the best to you, sue, sounds like you are trying to get your life back on track. good for you; you are in my prayers, sweetie! well done!
(((HUGS)))and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by A PAX
|The bottle and light could be symbolic of a lighthouse for you
warning you of that crash.........or guiding you past the rocks........
sail clear Sue