|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Great images, but I cringe at the mosquito one. Them suckers think I'm sweet or something.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|such is life William, and man better watchout or he may become a victim, super rendition of the dark side of life. G|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|extrememly vivid imagery ... i enjoyed reading this poem a lot ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This one gave me a shiver William, as I picture all
those things that go bump in the night . Great imagery!
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|the imagery here is fantastic...i was with you all the way|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A vivid write on the moments before dawn, I could see it all...
a beautiful, thoughtful offering William...
Love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Vivid write, William. You have a way of putting a twist on things...
Think I'll clear the cobwebs from the patio! Best to you, Poet, Carolyn
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|So well written that I would not improve upon it. I liked how you handled this one.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|One death, one life, what goes around does seem to come around. Or sumthin' lak dat. Loved this one. Am not a great "nature" buff, it seems the poetical world is overrun with poems about it, but this one was special to me. Good.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|A very contemplative write William.
There are miracles happening all around us
wheteher we are awake or dreaming.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Ahhhh To sleep...perchance to dream. Sometimes a sleepless night is a living nightmare. As we lie there in that foggy place somewhere between awake and asleep our mind wanders to those places that pull at our suppressed insecurities. So vulnerable are we as we teeter on the threshold of a dream. Interesting write...I could feel that frustrating feeling of sleeplessness.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent "sleepless" night discription!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I am up too, Rufuz woke me for some reason...ed|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|wonderful discriptions William :)
the night is alive as the day lol