|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Perfect! By using short lines, you put the reader in mind of a "quickie." That was a brilliant trick!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So your the one that got that den all heated up LOL ;-) Fun write.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|LOL.Ed That's rich! You mean the head banging stuff.
So will you make fun of me if it's too tame. ;)
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Step up La Belle Sue!! Think you've just put your finger (??!!) on what we've all bin missing!! But, you know, a lot of it is in the mind/eye of the beholder anyway, so suggest you get your specs adjusted and read between a few lines here and there... I'm sure it's all goin on and, since you wrote this yesterday, your inbox and message board must be fair jammed!! So, "if you can't be good, be careful"... as my VERY naughty Granny used to tell me... we will all certainly be watching this space!! LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I wish I could forget as well as you Sue!;-) hahaha great poem!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Been so long since I've had sex that I get excited at the crack of dawn...Ed|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lol! a poem like this could only come from experience ;)|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Hahahaha!!!!! Sue! Sue! Sue!...I have the pages hidden somewhere!...but they're too hot to be posting it here in the den... :)
Good sensual write and that's almost like a scream. Well-done indeed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Hmmmmnnnnn I think you just did it yourself and took half the male poets on the den wiith you. Very funny but very hot at the same time, good one Sue.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Lol Sue, frustrsated huh? check out 'I dream of you' 'Succubus' is quite hot too...excellent write.
Keep an eye out for some hot ones coming from the den of iniquity soon...lol
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|I think your memory just came back. Definitely stirred mine. Thanks for the fun:-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|"Bongotty " thoughts bugging you huh?
Hehehehehe.....tell it like it is right?!!