|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|sadness will be replaced by the sun once again if you just hang in there....great writing|
|Reviewed by evan horetsky
|oh i've had writes like this....that came from times like this.
Cheer up, in our poetry I believe we find some solace, as well as in the strength of others... if you need it, there's always mine, as well as many other den-mates, I'm sure.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Stunning imagery, painful emotion--excellently penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Beautiful with astonishing images. Sadness of my sadness. It will be happiness one day.|
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Excellenet expression, I need to read more of your works. Just well done, overall.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Fine write, C. We need these grey periods to reaccess our lives. As long as hope waters a spring in your heart, it won't dry out. Amazing what the human spirit endures and still carrys hope within. Oh, the water may be reduced to a trickle but faith will feed the source...|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|super Great poem, I really relate. We're doomed unless we "dare ourselves to be different." HaRD earned being different by choice. G|
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|Powerful...My hope is that the author finds light again, emerging from the crevice of darkness.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Will the fallen stars get back up there,
And place the moon in a starlit sky,
Will I find the oasis in the desert,
Or is my heart, just doomed to dry.
..I must say I love your style..very impressing work. Many, many times I found myself flooded by such thoughts..you are a very wise young woman..and you are my daughter's age..bless you!
I'm looking forward to many more poems which will effuse from your pen.
PS and yes you will find the one who will permeate you heart with all the love you can handle..you wait and see* ..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is outstanding poetry!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Welcome to my Den!!
|Reviewed by Lee Garrett
|"Doomed to dry" That's an unusal concept. Expressing sorrow as dehydration is highly original. This piece captures a spirit looking out of some shadowed place. I hope you've left that place behind by now. Good write.|
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|I love the beauty of Norway with its fjords, its mountains and its flowers. Vaya con Dios.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Hi first time reading your work and I like this one so I think I will enjoy your work in the future.
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|This is a good poem. I understand the feeling behind it. I like particularly the third stanza. It makes a whole lot of sense.
Thanks for the honor in passing my way.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Such a sad excellent piece of writing...
Thanks for stopping by.......
|Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati
|"Will I find the oasis in the desert,
Or is my heart, just doomed to dry. 'very heartfelt making the eyes wet of the darkness encircling and hope lingering in the corner of the mind pessimism trickling ! Great thought penned masterly! Thank you dear Hottran!
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Very fine and moving write. The heart is a renewable part of the soul and though at times damaged and torn, it has the capacity to heal. Wonderful write.
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Familiar feelings....well written verse, very well expressed.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can SO relate to this moving poem. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Awe common - A Reason 4 Everything, Nomatter how hard the reach.... Deeply talented in your metaphors -C- :) I enjoyed getting lost in your thoughts... Thank you 4 sharing. Many HuGs- Lady,Sheee
We R our childrens example- I too am in the same place -Alone and plunging foward- U will B fine-Believe and you will succeed.