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I Am The Lonesome Love
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Friday, April 22, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart,
amongst the flashy lust and shrunken idyllic trust.
I dreamed that I was made in the garden of Heaven
to prevail harmony in these charismatic beds of Earth.

But in my mind’s authenticity, I know now who I am;
yet I shine incessantly like the Sun and shed warmth
to all within the midst of their freezing compassion
in the swirling atmosphere of fathomless heartburns.

I never complain of my loneliness to any single heart
but deep down inside, I know how much lonely I am;
I have ghastly insomnia and I am interminably awake,
sometimes my own warmth burns my soul’s memoir.

Yet I don’t remonstrate for I am estranged from all,
I am forlorn and have no one to heal my hearts burn.
I reside in the great height but I have the lowest joy
but still I smolder my heart and dispense love to all.

If you think I am happy then try being me for once,
then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore.
For, I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart,
amongst the flashy lust and shrunken idyllic trust.


Copyright Bhuwan Thapaliya.


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Reviewed by Saundra Washington D.D. 6/19/2005
You have the uncanny ability to arouse deep emotions with your poems. I love your title which was brought alive by the verses that followed. How gifted you are.
Reviewed by L. Figgins 4/25/2005
Beautiful write. I beleive that you're speaking of hope, Bhuwan. Something that in third world countries is becoming increasing rare. Bless your compassionate heart for the work you do to help others...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/25/2005
Moving and meaningful, Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/23/2005
Oh how much I love your poetry, it never fails to move me so deeply, beautiful and so poignant Bhuwan,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 4/23/2005
This pulls violently on the heart of the reader, Bhuwan. Remember this always and use it to heal your lonely heart..."love is a gift that we give to ourself." No one else can give it to us, they can give us hope, but love is an emotion that comes from within.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by jude forese 4/23/2005
excellent portrayal of a lonely heart ...
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 4/22/2005
Bhuwan, your writing is so flawless and evocative. Felt the lonesome love in every line. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Dawn
Reviewed by Paul Williams 4/22/2005
A sadly beautiful write Bhuwan extremely well written.

Paul;-]
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/22/2005
beautiful deep insightful write Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sue Hess 4/22/2005
how sadly emotional...you expressed it well
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/22/2005
Deep insightful write that will touch the heart of all that read it.
Reviewed by Henry Stevens 4/22/2005
A sad poem, but very well written. Strong images. Unique use of words with beautiful results. Henry
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 4/22/2005
A very deep commentary on the sadness of loneliness. I pray it not be true. Luck and Love Mikii
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