|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|this piece is so sad, because it is so prevalent. so difficult for parents to hold their tempers with their little ones, and so many are so hurt instide from past hurts that they simply must pass it on, regardless of the eventual cost to their own souls. you express this ably, and even though it is such a stark and hurt-filled scenario, your wordsmithing is direct and to the point, no frills or sidebars necessary.|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|No child deserves to go through this. A very sad, chilling and compelling write.
" ... Your love came with a sting from the knuckles of your fist.
If only I could scream or cry
but my mouth forever silenced. "
Great write, Robin! God bless,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Powerful write and great choice of words. Emotions run high in this one.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o(
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Very Powerful and So sad. You really captured the horror of the cruel way of "love" ... Your love came with a sting from the knuckles of your fist.
Thank you so much
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Starkly realistic and compelling, Robin. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Poetic expression from a heart that was searching for wisdom.
"Lost Little Girl" strikes thoughts on life and humanity.
I enjoyed the reading of this poem, "Lost Little Girl".
Thank You for sharing Your thoughts through Your poetic art.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow. Powerful is an understatment.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Powerfully emotive poem ... well-done; Bravo!!
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Powerfully dark, tragic, and gripping poem. Well written...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|WOW what a tragically well written poem...no child should have to endure this, mother should mean comfort and safety|