|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Thank for taking me on this universal trip, Linda. I needed it and what a beauty! ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Magnificient celestial write.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|As long as you make it to the bathroom and let the flow flow, as it were...all will be well with the universe...Ed|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|This is right down my universal street Linda, Excellent.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful work Linda!!
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
|beautiful, beautiful write, not only in the flow of imagery, but in its scientific correctness...awesome!|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This is really good Linda and keep up the good work. I enjoy writes like this.|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Your creative mind has given us a write with a few different meanings. A meltdown where pieces try to come back together, or where love can conquer all, when two become one... or... I'm way off
Either way, great write... and I am very happy to see you posting again, I missed your spiritual, universal message... Dave
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love it! Very unique write.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Love this total meltdown inside a universal inferno, Linda! I love the way you capture both the micro- and the macrocosm of this within the human scale of experience. Orgiastic, thankyou!! Big Bang extraordinaire! LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Great graphic; your poetic brilliance shines in this write - wonderful!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Brilliant imagery, Linda. Well done. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very creative and imaginative fluidity to this clever poem ...|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Linda this is so good. I really like
this type of verse. Outstanding!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Ooooh, I love this one--stunning imagery and many outstanding lines! My favorite: "We exhale a meteor shower of desire." GORGEOUS!
We both had the heights on our minds :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, linda! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|love and astrology...or is it science. nice combination anyway|
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|Good and funny.
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Fun poem from outer space. Henry|