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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/24/2005 |
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| Wonderful job, Steve! |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
4/24/2005 |
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| just loved this poem, well written! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/24/2005 |
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Steven,
A beautiful write, and I'm sure she'll remember you, too
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/24/2005 |
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| i am sure she will remember you :-) |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
4/24/2005 |
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All I can say is WOW!
You write magnificent poetry!
How did you get to be sooo good?!?!?!
I felt very "intoxicated" while reading this poem.
It was as if you were right near me.
Weird I guess but then in another way, it was not at all.
Take care!
Becca P (Henry) Lang |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/24/2005 |
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| I never tired or got lost in your wording......EXCellent write my friend- It's me Sheee- I do hOpe you understand my gravitation in your work styles, as I explained earlier. YOUr line - "I reach out to you again, despite my FEARS", and ""Is it too late to be FREE. I'm hoping others can and will reach out from there. *( Please do-WE Welcome YOU and all you want to share) Were all from the 1 Universe made from up above, - The Blessings are Many as we Open our Eyes and Ears to it all, around us. Listen! as they speak to you.. YOU have Opened up something here my friend, *( If I can say that, and believe that)-Listen for it and Expect it, the Universe is opening up- we won't get gobbled up by it-only join it's many revelations to it's layers. Many Inspirational words B 2 U, HuGs-Lady,Sheee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/24/2005 |
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| I like this kinka unorthodox poem very much. You give the reader just enough words to understand the premise but not so many that overwhelm. Good. |
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