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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/25/2005 |
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| sorry, for me the font is much too small and most of the poem is cut off ... can't scroll it down either ... (don't use netscape) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/24/2005 |
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A truly captivating write Ron, the vortex to me is always
so exciting .I used netscape, and it was fine. beautiful
work.
love,
eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/24/2005 |
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I highlighted the text which made it easier to read. When I tried to remove the frame I got a "this page cannot be displayed" message, probably because it was a pop-up or something like that. I think it would be possible to copy and paste the poem into Word then increase the font size there. This was a blue write, but a very interesting read. The flow of the piece kept my attention through the end. Very good poem, Ron!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
4/24/2005 |
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| Well-penned proof, Ronald, that angst is not just for teenagers. Sigh... though it isn't evident what has you down, you're not alone. This rings true for most of us at one time or another. Feel better and keep writing! This is a gut-wrencher, but cleverly worded. katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/24/2005 |
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Sorry cannot read a thing....
Okay you did bend my neck not my mind yet..lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/24/2005 |
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| Always thought your brain was being squeezed and your mind on the bend...also I am glad I had a magnifying glass as not even my bifocals could read that one...LOL! You and Linda Gayton are on the same page of late or so it seems...Enjoyed this, Ed & Rufuz |
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