|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|cool rendition B, enjd readiing this. G|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Masterfully crafted and written with sublime metaphors ... excellent!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Oh! Your body is
a wooden boat
with full of holes.
rugged is your core
as the virgin
cliff of the shore.
great image to this excellent poem ...
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A powerful write indeed Bhuwan. Great!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Powerfully insightful Bhuwan, this was stunning in its insightfulness,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bhuwan you put a new light on this old profession.
Perhaps it is the way to see it! Great write!
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Excellent write Buhwan your superb use of metaphor makes this all the more powerful...stunner of a tribute.
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|Alas, all men are not as honest about harboring the whores in their hearts until they become one. Excellent write my friend. Love and luck. Mikii|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|trust you to write a poem that cuts to the core and ekes out drops of recognition, understanding and compassion for those we'd otherwise dismiss. excellent!|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is so stirring and soulful; so compassionate and achingly close to the bone - for all of us in one way or another, I think. There is the Mary Magdalene and the Judas in all of us, perhaps, and we can feel the tearing on both sides of this fence. Perhaps the whore is the tear that holds the frayed fabric of society together... or, at least, her soul does... Makes me weep. LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Mary Magdelene would have appreciated this verse. Christ saw beyond her label to her soul...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|very interesting, i'm always happy when someone understands the core underneath the label|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|An empathic tribute, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Thoughtful poem. Henry|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Strong and profound, Bhuwan. I cannot imagine what it would be like to be a whore, (not a real one at least) but giving them credit due, they do a job most would never wish to undertake and most do it with a certain amount of finesse and style. It is said that being a whore is the oldest profession, I cannot dispute that point, but I have often wondered why whores continue to have clients?