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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
5/5/2005 |
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| Oh, WHAT a grandfather YOU must be, William!! I LOVED this. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
5/1/2005 |
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| Hahaha, how delightful! Well done, William. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
4/29/2005 |
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| This would work even better as a children's picture book because with these words and illustrations added to it, it would bring a child's imagination alive and have them giggling. It would really come across strong as a book- you should think about sending it to some publishers for kids- if you search the market for a publisher that publishes a similiar style to yours, I bet you can get this published- and the best part if that you don't even need an agent to sell kids books. This was alot of fun, and I bet your granddaughter LOVED it!! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
4/27/2005 |
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Hee, hee, what the kids come up with?
Delightful write William.... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/27/2005 |
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| a poem any child would love ... |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
4/27/2005 |
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| what a wonderful poem for your granddaughter |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/26/2005 |
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What an enchanting write Bill....for a enchanting little girl..Beautiful my friend..
Peace and love, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/26/2005 |
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| Bet she is a beauty too, the apple of her granpops eye as well...a fun write, Bill...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/25/2005 |
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Hehehehehe...what a delightful read!!
Thanks for sharing this gem!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/25/2005 |
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What a lovely story/poem for your sweet Jacqueline!
Wonderful work William!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/25/2005 |
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Oh this was so sweet, what a lovely poem for your grandchild, beautiful and so cute!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
4/25/2005 |
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| Okay and this is what being a child is all about. You really did well in writing this poem about your grandaughter. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/25/2005 |
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| She loved this nutty poem i am quite sure. I did, too. |
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