|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Oh, WHAT a grandfather YOU must be, William!! I LOVED this. Dawn|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Hahaha, how delightful! Well done, William.|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|This would work even better as a children's picture book because with these words and illustrations added to it, it would bring a child's imagination alive and have them giggling. It would really come across strong as a book- you should think about sending it to some publishers for kids- if you search the market for a publisher that publishes a similiar style to yours, I bet you can get this published- and the best part if that you don't even need an agent to sell kids books. This was alot of fun, and I bet your granddaughter LOVED it!!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Hee, hee, what the kids come up with?
Delightful write William....
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a poem any child would love ...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|what a wonderful poem for your granddaughter|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|What an enchanting write Bill....for a enchanting little girl..Beautiful my friend..
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Bet she is a beauty too, the apple of her granpops eye as well...a fun write, Bill...Ed|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hehehehehe...what a delightful read!!
Thanks for sharing this gem!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a lovely story/poem for your sweet Jacqueline!
Wonderful work William!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh this was so sweet, what a lovely poem for your grandchild, beautiful and so cute!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Okay and this is what being a child is all about. You really did well in writing this poem about your grandaughter.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|She loved this nutty poem i am quite sure. I did, too.|