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  Dream Scene (j) ... The Spacious Cantina
by jude forese
Monday, April 25, 2005
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In my dream I was falling through clouds

The wind blowing my hair wildly:
Air rushing past my ears
Like the roar of a cargo train
Traveling inside an endless tunnel
Through caverns inside my nomadic brain

I saw a small villa
High upon a mountainside
And rapidly approached
Closing in
Like a magnetic target
Toward these long and wiry iron gates

They opened up so slowly
Like in a slow-motion movie
With thunder roaring in the distance
And lightning flickering the darkened terrain

The villa transformed into a small cantina
Inside what appeared to be a ghost town:
Tumble weed and dusty shadows
Popped in and out of view

The cantina’s swinging doors opened
Beckoning me inside
Where voices intensely crescendo
Like a impassioned opera

I was pulled in as is if I had wheels on my feet:
No control over my movement
Only apprehension consumed my will

Once inside,
Colorful Flamenco dancers suddenly appeared
As guitars, shouts, hand clapping and finger-snapping
Satiated the atmosphere

I was invisible
Behind curtains
Wandering through long corridors

Compelled to move further into the dark labyrinth:
Moving ahead with determined curiosity

Realizing I was dreaming
I saw a new born lying on a field of grass
Pointing to the sky above

I now appreciated I was in the entrance
To tomorrow morning’s bounty
 



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Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
recognizing prophetic dreams is so cool
Reviewed by Victor Farrell
Lucid dreams are fascinating! I like this!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Too much Corona and tequila? Hard to write dreams--they move too fast.

Ron
Reviewed by Dave Harm
This is really beautiful... the birth of a new dawn...
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
You have created a sense of mise en scene with superb imagery. I hear the Gipsy Kings playing in the background. Wonderous!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Robert,

O, my--stunning, exquisitely imaged, powerfully penned dream and write--one experienced it with you! Well done, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Well, it looks like the analysts have you covered. ;-) It's quite a read. I need to reduce my stress level and get back to such dreams.
~~Nordette
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
A vivid, imaginative dream...written beautifully, as always!

Peace, Carole
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Most Excellent Best Yet!

TRASK
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Yes you certainly were traveling in this dream to see the birth of something beautiful! Very exciting. Thanks for the sharing.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Robert,

Thanks for allowing us to dream along with you in this stunning poem ... perfection to a 'T'!!

Blessings,

Robert
Reviewed by Dale Clark
This is powerful and I thought "eastern" also.
Outstanding!
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
very eastern in feeling...captivating in depth and tone...so much imagery that keeps one swimming alone nicely.
Reviewed by Paul Williams
The dream analyst's are going to have a field day with this one Robert...superb imagery, your 'Spacious Cantina' is abound in sub-conscious brilliance...methinks new a level consciousness is born.

Paul;-]
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
damn ..you're good..wow!!


Vesna*
Reviewed by Sassy Cat (Reader)
A stunningly visual poem full of symbolism and vivid imagery.

Sassy *S*
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
absolutely A wonderful dream flight!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
good one
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Finally a sense of spirituality permeates this dream scene
and the birth of a new dawn is especially splendid!
You crafted this with superb descriptions, a pleasure to
take part in and enjoy the essence.

Eileen
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Loved the color and motion of your dream. Your descriptions drew me in completely, and I especially like the image of the newborn and the idea of "tomorrow morning's bounty." Fascinating.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
I really loved the images, Robert, particularly the "wheels on your feet" part. I was envisioning R2-D2 actions in a human body with all his twisting and spinning. I also was envisioning the town of Tombstone with its wooden sidewalks and the sound of boots and spurs echoing as Cowboys strolled along. This was a treat of vibrant visions and so very much like a dream that I wondered, for a moment, if I was perhaps dreaming it all myself.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wow this one is deep and special I'm thinking of gunfighters, cold beer and ladys of the night and that dissappears to be replaced by children in fields of grass. Good one.

Felix
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Wow! amazing what dreams bring us...
thanks for sharing...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
wow..what a powerful and symbolic dream, this sounds excellent, love how you wrote about this in such detail, excellent poetry and dream,

Reindeer
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