by Anniemoh Ohio
Monday, April 25, 2005
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Tattered emotions shred by words
Anger-filled and blood red
Seeking weakness, capitalizing on doubt
Delivered in vindication
Bearing deception and fantasy
Or a blurred view of reality
Self-righteous and halo-high
Read the writing on the wall
Revenge without equity
Leads to desperation and sadness
Pen what will be and not what might have been
And succumb to happiness in sincerity
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|There is wisdom and truth to your verses, Anne. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a wise poem and very interesting artwork, Anne ...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Thnx Anne, this is very wonderful advice for people like me, who have a nova sized hole and emptiness in her soul. Thnx for sharing this, and it is so true too. Jesus said, when they chased the prostitute Mary Magdelene, and she fell at Jesus' feet, asking Him to help her. When he asked what she had done and was told, He said to the crowd, "Let he who is without sin, cast the first stone." This is soooooooooooo true Anne, and I thank you sharing this with us. If I didn't know better, I'd have said this was written for me. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and all of those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This one is right to the point and captures your topic in an iron fist. Very well done.