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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/9/2005 |
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Damn, the emotions just EXPLODE off the page! Strongly visceral, powerful write--WELL DONE!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
5/4/2005 |
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_Aberjhani,
Magnificent poetic write ... penned to perfection!!
Blessings,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
5/4/2005 |
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| THese are knowings: from which you have always ran...is a particularly grabbing statement. It is forcefully rendered. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/3/2005 |
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felt the truth and pain (for expression sake)
in stating......enjoyed
the sting
(miss it) |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
5/1/2005 |
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I can only echo the sentiments of my peers. Your poetic genius is well evidenced here. I am a great admirer of your work. You inspire me to new heights.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
5/1/2005 |
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| Great depth of meaning in your words, Outstanding write. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/30/2005 |
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| You have great talent and you unselfishly share it most aptly in these verse once again. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/29/2005 |
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| your powerfully descriptive poetic analysis leaves me in awe ... some cannot handle the truth about themselves so they run from it ... |
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| Reviewed by Iva Lawson |
4/29/2005 |
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| I've heard you were the master poet. You get no arguement from me on that. I once opened myself up and took a look inside. This work reminds me of what I saw there. Once I recovered from fainting at the sight of me, I felt brave enough to look again. Yeah, that was me allright. Writing always cleanses me. Thank you for the depth of this piece. |
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| Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu |
4/29/2005 |
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Powerful tapestry from the master. Your pen is always an arrow piercing through the soul of your readers. Thank you very much.
Emeka |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/28/2005 |
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"Living on the Edge 2" delivers its message through wise sounds.
It is a poetic glow from the fountain of wisdom.
Healthy be Your creative days, sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
4/28/2005 |
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| Feed it self-forgiveness and fly, you beautiful soul. Grow and soar! As always, stunning work. I printed it out and meditated on it in a parking lot while waiting for my kids. :-) ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
4/28/2005 |
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You have some lovely word-relations, Poet Aberjhani, like strange and struggles, thoughts and thousand, radioactive and hatred. I can also feel the 'b's' presences in all the verses and some intriguing lop-sides vowel alliteration.
Linda's right, this one, to me, was felt, but not so much, at first, in the meaning of its words, but in its lettering structure and moody tone. Then, awareness bites and propounds the secondary realization of the meaning of those words, creating a double-pathos echoing effect that still rings in my mind.
Thank you for this lesson.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/28/2005 |
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| Some poems you FEEL, and to describe them is futile. To hear your poetry aloud would be beauty, Aberjhani...Startling when you see yourself in a crystal mirror, devoid of illusion. The shame burns truth. You know her name. You come to your authentic self. Your tears cleanse. You grow. From everything you grow... |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
4/28/2005 |
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Exceedingly profound and poignant discourse exploring our polemic nature painted in pure art. Superb!
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/28/2005 |
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| Whoa! Puttin' the bad-mouth on somebody. I wonder who. Have my ideas. A punch to the gut poem. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/28/2005 |
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| This is so powerful, Aberjhani: deeply personal and yet so universal. We are all men and all men are us. Guilty and yet innocent at the same time. The ties that bind us to each other... and even more so to ourselves - are strong. This is so graphic and intense that it is almost like shards of glass beneath my bare feet... and rightly so. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/28/2005 |
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Excellent powerful piece...thanks for this offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/28/2005 |
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Aberjhani, your poems are always a feast for the poets soul!
Thank you for sharing! However you have lived, methinks you
are doing something right, if you can write like this;-)
Eileen |
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