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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
8/11/2005 |
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| Amira, it surly seems that far too often, that the heartaches of ones past mistakes, or possible regrets will override ones urge to set foot into unfamiliar territory. As it’s said, “patience is a virtue,” and I am quite sure with time and understanding, all good things do come to those who wait. An excellent yearning composition. It’s such a pleasure to read your work once again, my gifted friend. Take good care and be well. |
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
7/10/2005 |
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How could I have missed this! Great emotion here, Amira...I'd make sure he read this:)
Warm wishes from the desert! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/9/2005 |
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"But he holds back
doesn't show emotions
doesn't say the words I wait for
doesn't do the things I hope for"
You sum up a lot of men in these verses, Amira.
Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/14/2005 |
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A most beautiful and haunting poem
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
5/24/2005 |
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Men have their insecurities too. Maybe you should get him in a comfortable zone ...
God bless and all the best, Amira.
Sandie.
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
4/29/2005 |
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| great write! I hope everything comes out the way you want them to..sometimes you have smack a guy upside the head before he REALLY takes notice of you (just don't hit him too hard ;) ) great to see you, by the way :) Don't stay away so long this time |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/29/2005 |
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Moving write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/29/2005 |
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This is a heartache Amira! I hope and pray
it turns out as you hope for. Fine poem!
Good to see you;-)
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
4/29/2005 |
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| maybe you should make the first move |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
4/29/2005 |
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Sounds like you need to have a frank talk with him.
Good luck |
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