|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
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|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|so many lose spirit
and walk as zombies
blunt force poetry!!!
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Short Sweet Blunt Truthful and right to the Very point of life.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
No one can accuse you of being long winded: this hits home like a bullet! Excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Superb Peter, lol...short and to the point.
|Reviewed by Saul Logan
|LOL...that's great...morbid humor and straight to the point...|
|Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
|no matter what anyone tells me, i don't hink i have a problem; i only do it recreationally...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I know what haiku is, wish I knew what senryu was, as this poem is still a 5, 7, 5 combination so whats the dif...? beyond that it seems we all are addicted to life, & eventually must kick another habit too...Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|does RIP mean, Resurrected In order to write Poetry?|
|Reviewed by Claywoman
|I think kicking this addiction would cause some pain...at least those left behind...Where in England is this headstone Peter?|
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|I've kicked all of my other bad habits, but I'll never kick THAT habit lol...BTW, what in the world is senryu????|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Aw, jeez! First of all this is senryu, not haiku. Secondly, you're sick. That's not a bad thing.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|cool...i have an addictive personality but that is one addiction i don't want to kick|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|LOL! Very clever. Where is the stone located?|