|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Emotional writing and emotional reading. I am not afraid of death having watch my loving hubby die right before me. It is sad to have to go on sometimes, but positive I must be. Liked this picture and the poetry too. Death is final and we go to Heaven and everyone has to die, but not before our time is up. I must remember that. Often it seems.|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|that was an intense read...very descriptive and emotive...great write, gwen!|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|What an amzing finale! Gwen how come you can describe death like this? It seems as if you have tasted it before and then resurrected to show us how the process will look like when time comes to go for good. The poem touches the soul not in a way to soothe but in a way to take it. A wonderful poem.|
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|captivaiting, excellent write!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An outstanding write Gwen
thanks for sharing
William ....Peace & Love
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Thought provoking and very powerfully portrayed, Gwen. Death is not the end in itself - he is but the messenger boy and the chaperone to the Great Beyond! Like birth, we all have to pass through the dark tunnel before arriving on the other side. Reminds me of potholing somehow, of which I am mortally afraid... yet I feel I could jump out of an airplane any day!! Its something to do with "deep", "dark" and "water", I think... must have had a difficult birth, I guess! Graphic and well-written, thank you! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Very poweful poem
thanks for sharing this gem
love and peace
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly captivating poem, Gwen - love that artwork, too.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Hard to come up with words not already said, Gwen.
A masterpiece that flows and flows. I love the picture too.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|I like this lots Gwen, powerful and stunning art work to match.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautifully and powerfully insightful and excellent Gwen, What a most excellent poem!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful beautiful write! It is good that you showed that even with strong belief's that moment can be very dark and scary....but the light always wins :-)|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This is unique, and powerful Gwen :)
well done :)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yep ... death can be a friend when we survive its embrace ... Gwen, you did a fantastic job with this poem ...|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|The picture is a wonderful set up for the poem, which is strong. Good job. Henry|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Powerful and reflective. Your works conquer death.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Gwen what a fantastic journey you took us on!
I'm elated with your finale! I've felt
similar events and visions, most beautiful!
Isn't it exciting. I can only say, may it be!
When that time comes may it be!;-)
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Great art work .....Powerful write fantastically written!!!!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|I Fear Not Death (Nor Any Human Being) I Welcome It Death For There Is No Fear-It Fear Is Only In (Your Minds)You..
Credit For The write!
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|Wow this is gripping. I found myself getting goosebumps while reading this. It doesn't matter if one agrees with the premise or not, anyone can appreciate great poetry and I really do.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I don't agree with the premise, but it makes for a nice poem.|
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most outstanding Gwen!!
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Gwen, this is an exquisite poem!|