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A TOUCH OF KNIGHT
by A PAX
Wednesday, May 04, 2005
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The motto of chivalry is also the motto of wisdom; to serve all,

but love only one~Balzac

 

 

A TOUCH OF KNIGHT

 

Knight in armor silver bright

Ride from chaos towards the light

Rein your horse towards magic wood

Towards your Lady......draped by hood

 

Feel her magic from afar

'Neath the twlight of your star

Hear her whispers thru the trees

Taste her kisses the breeze

 

Fluid mist to pad this realm

Eye of oak....and eye of elm

Rainbow lights to spark your way

Down her path........of conjured sway

 

Shed your armor, knight....and rest

Lay your head on waiting breast

Leave the battles.....rest with peace

Touch your Lady.....find release

 

Taim i'ngra leat

 

Pax

A

 

 
   


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Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
Hello Anita, i see and i'm not at all surprised that your writing is a strong as ever, i have missed it and have a lot of catching up to do, but thats the best part of being away, the coming back part, hope this finds you well and smiling, this is an excellent write that rolls around ones head like a picture you cant shut off, very well done here, take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Oh, Anita... I'm sitting here waiting (patiently!) for the audible sighs to quiet. What a sense you have for authenticating this "period piece"... as though you've whisked us all back in time. I entirely collapsed on the last two lines... Jays, the neighbors heard me then! (smile) I'm keeping this... I have to, I love it!

You write like no other... and I always tell the truth! katy xox
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
wonderful write...BHUWAN!!!!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Beautiful medieval wish. Just found out that the idea of chivalry was born in the Crusades when captured Christian soldiers were treated civilly by the likes of Saleedin. They brought those Moslem ideas home to France and England. Love that photo.

Ron
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
May I share this with Michael sis? This is sooooooo beautiful and soooooooooo sweet. I was daydreaming I was the lady waiting for her knight to return and lay his head on my beating breast, and have him just relax there. On this Mother's Day, this is such a beautiful piece to share. Thnx a bunch sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY Anita

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by andrea coltman
Anita, such a beautiful write, captivating,enchanting...best wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
There is a breath of enchantment in this poem, Anita. Your rhyme and meter are wonderful. Bold images make this poem absolutely captivating. Love the graphic too! Really excellent job!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A woman friend of mine once called me a knight; "Sir Reg." After reading this beauty, I feel pretty good about that. Thank you for sharing this offering, Anita. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
This poem has magic..your flow,meter and rythme..awesome
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Must be losin me marbles... sure I reviewed this last night, but perhaps I didn't press the post button?! Mad woman - or maybe I just said something so awful you had to delete... wine speak, maybe... this is just so velvety and tactile and taps straight into me Arthurian roots, Anita. Pure Arwen and Aragorn that splits heart and soul asunder like The Sword - after all, ain't this what deep down we're all aching for?! An undivided and unassailable heart is to be enshrined forever... pure bliss and rapture at its height. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Oh, thank you for this, Lady A, and the quote too. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Where have I been to miss this beauty? I've always loved film related to this era, and this poem or incantation evokes the romance and mood of that time. (Can I use this? lol!)
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Love these knightly tales and you've
turned this one into a beautiful
romantic ballad. ballad? well...you
know what I mean. Seriously it's nice.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Now THAT is one heck of a poem !

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Lady A,

Hypnotic. Mesmerizing. GAD I love the way you write--my heart is galloping with the perfection of metered rhyme you've penned! Your compliment right back to you: WISH I'D WRITTEN IT!!!!!!!! LOL WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
I am salivating. What a beauty you have penned down here. A shinning amor that weathered all obstacle just to be have a taste of you.
Great, Great, Greeeeeeeat!!!!!!!!!!!

Write on!

Emeka
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
lovely written.
Reviewed by David Knight
Very evocative, I was almost there.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Your pen is flawless in this gorgeous poem Anita!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
Eye of oak... and eye of elm... Only in magical realms padded by mist are whispers and spells understood as they kiss through the trees, who have a beautiful language of their own. This is a tale of utter fascination, Anita. Love it!
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Lovely write Anita!!

Truly magnificent!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron
mysterious and lovely as you do so well
with your unique imagination Anita! Art is gorgeous!

Alrisha
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Excellent write. I enjoyed the theme and the rhyme.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
nicely done
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
This reads like a mystical incantation by a druidic priestess. Well done.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wow what wonderfully romantic middle ages thoughts are running through my head after reading this I want to find the time machine and go back as a knight. This is great no kidding the inages are almost jumping off the pages.

Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Old Ballsac, now there was a guy knew how to turn a phrase, don't you know. I was galloping right with this Knight so brave (and horney) as he sped toward his lady-love. Uh huh, love, know-whot-I-mean-Doretha?
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
I love it!! Beautiful!! : )

Jack
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