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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
5/8/2005 |
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| Good, solid, thoughtful penning, Lisa. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
5/6/2005 |
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Good question. I think they represent the tears of all, who have inward expression bursting at the seams, either way, it releases the built up pain inside. Healing!
Love Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
5/5/2005 |
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| Lisa, I think there is a little bit of the child in each of us. This is a really good, really smart poem. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/5/2005 |
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Lisa,
You've penned the quintessential thought provoker--within every Poet lives a Man, but not every Man is a Poet. Well, maybe there IS a Poet within every Man, if it's not beaten out of him...you've written a poignant, eloquent poem, you just keep improving--thank you for sharing this one! One of your best (and I've saved much of your work, for I love the way you write).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( *tears* you've made me cry again-- |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/5/2005 |
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| Very nice. This speaks volumes. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/5/2005 |
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wonderful thought proker here, lisa; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
happy mother's day to you and to all the moms here! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/5/2005 |
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I think the poet though often finding a strange sense of atonement from poring their hearts and souls out in their work also pay a heavy price at times baring the innermost fears to the display of the world. Greaaaaaat Write Lisa.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
5/5/2005 |
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| Excellent, soulful questioning here, Lisa. Really well done. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/5/2005 |
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| Outstanding write my friend...clap clap clap....very deep and powerful....love n luck....BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
5/5/2005 |
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| this is beautiful, poignantly written |
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| Reviewed by Henry Stevens |
5/5/2005 |
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| Haunting, painful. Well done poem. Henry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/5/2005 |
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Oh Lisa this is deep and touched me even deeper!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
5/5/2005 |
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| Very touching poem, Lisa. Amazing how one can reflect theirs and others, painful experiences with the written word. So many can gleen a page from their own lives, from someone else's writings. Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/5/2005 |
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This is so excellent, Lisa. I believe that some of us are a channels for the thoughts and words of others. Perhaps we possess a portal through which those who have passed away or those who have incredible strength of mind are able to pour their thoughts and life stories into us so that they pour out of our pens. I really like this, which is true of all that I find at your den. You are such a talented writer.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
5/5/2005 |
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| This poem is really excellent written! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/5/2005 |
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| Your work has taken on a definite swing toward the "inner Lisa" these days. Poems of searching and wondering and all is causing me to miss my old Lisa, the one that shouted truth for all to hear. I do not dislike this newer and more sensitive Lisa, just miss the other one. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/5/2005 |
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An outstanding piece Lisa
well penned
William .....Peace & Love |
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