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A Southern Reaction
by Lisa Hilbers

Friday, May 06, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A Southern Reaction


If one stirs a pile of dung,

it's stink you will get-

If reaction was intended-

Keep reading for my fit

You said, "I know you 'swallo' "

well you've never been so right-

I chew up Sociopaths,

bite after tasty bite

There may be worms in your eyeballs,

but those are an added treat-

You've met your match my friend,

and I will not retreat

True names is of no concern,

for I know who you are-

And there is no place for you to hide,

there is no place too far

Apparently you didn't do your homework,

before you decided to attack-

Or you would've known this about me-

this 'ol Southern gal, packs

I will be your nightmare,

you'll wake in sweat and choke-

and Idon T. Swallo, will be history,

with my fingers around your throat!


You Sir, started something I will finish

Lisa Hilbers

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Reviewed by Colonel Robert Morris 11/11/2009
I love it!!! It warms my ol' southern bones.
Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Colonel Robert Morris
'the southern troubadour'
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/17/2005
Not again. Atta girl, just level your revolver and rotate 'em out.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/8/2005
Wow! I'm slipping, I almost missed this one! Lisa you are incredible!
I agree with all the others! Anyone who would take you on is brain dead!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/8/2005
Lisa, did you read my blog about authors? I had you down as "Southern Lisa Horizons...frank like me." LOL. I don't know who you're talking about but, yeah, I guess they didn't study up. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/7/2005
Tell it like the way you feel, Lisa. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 5/6/2005
Excellent!! leaves no doubt and I love it! Bravo!!
I'm so glad it says Sir!
Thanks Lisa.xo
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/6/2005
Interesting write... I doubt that Idon T. deserves the attention, but kick his ass anyways.
Reviewed by jude forese 5/6/2005
luv the fire in your sails!
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 5/6/2005
Southern Belle, you've really got some style!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/6/2005

OUCH. I have no doubt--

I'm sorry you're being attacked. I love the way you write, you're one of my very favorites here, and know I am in your corner. :) Lean on me--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/6/2005
You go girl! Kick ass!

If you are going to "turn the other cheek", make it "their's" and brand it with your name. *generic smiley*

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/6/2005
oh, i sense something here, lisa? hope it isn't directed at me! take care, and hope all is well; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/6/2005
Oh boy you sound like you are mad at someone!!

Take care girl...hope everything is okay???

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sue Hess 5/6/2005
what is this lisa, has someone been picking on you? you really gave em hell, lady
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/6/2005
I am not sure who you are going gunning for but knowing you I wouldn't want to be in their shoots. Good luck hunting babes.

Reviewed by Paul Williams 5/6/2005
Wow Lisa, someones really got you go for it girl.

Reviewed by John Bidwell 5/6/2005
Sounds like someone doesn't seserve the time of day from you.
My Mom always said, "Don't let someone live in your head rent free."
But my money's on you. This give's um what for.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 5/6/2005
Okay and I know it was not me because I am southern too and I pretty much pack too. Hey it has been a long time since I got all my frustrations out on whoever does these things.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/6/2005
Kicking ass and taking at least one name . . . Idon T. Swallo.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/6/2005
You go, Lisa!! This slime bags is just an impotent bag of wind who hides behind a fake name so that he/she can make their feeble attempt at his/her attacks. They are like little children who leave bags of burning dung on a doorstep then run for cover after ringing the bell. Childish and ingorant, they stir the hive with a long stick as they don't have the wit or the courage to face the consequences of their actions. Good job, Lisa! Fortunately, everyone here knows you well enough to know that whatever that slug of a lifeform writes, even if he should attempt to steal your identity to do so, will be cast aside with the knowledge that it certainly did not come from your pen. Guess he never heard "Don't Mess With Texas!"
Take care,
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