|Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
|You've certainly done your part to wake people up. That eye should see a lot of things we've been missing.
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|A very powerful message. Concerns I share. An outspoken and effective poem.|
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Ron you blew the smoke away with this one! Fantastic imagery, love the eye. I can hear a melody to this gem!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I believe that we all need to wake up and smell the coffee so to speak.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|certainlly an important wake up call you've reinforced with some fantastic lines ... yes, the signs are in the air ...|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|I hear tunes of Simon and Garfunkle in these words.
(Can you send them overseas to Iraq?)
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Very creative. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ooo, Ron, that eye up there is a very effective part of this piece.
I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...Ripped from the pages yet unwritten,
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Stark reality poem Ron!!