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| Reviewed by Bob Holt |
5/13/2005 |
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You've certainly done your part to wake people up. That eye should see a lot of things we've been missing.
Bob H |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
5/13/2005 |
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| A very powerful message. Concerns I share. An outspoken and effective poem. |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
5/10/2005 |
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| Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/8/2005 |
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Ron you blew the smoke away with this one! Fantastic imagery, love the eye. I can hear a melody to this gem!
Eileen Alrisha |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
5/8/2005 |
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| I believe that we all need to wake up and smell the coffee so to speak. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/8/2005 |
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| certainlly an important wake up call you've reinforced with some fantastic lines ... yes, the signs are in the air ... |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
5/8/2005 |
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I hear tunes of Simon and Garfunkle in these words.
(Can you send them overseas to Iraq?)
Peace,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/8/2005 |
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| Very creative. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
5/8/2005 |
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Ooo, Ron, that eye up there is a very effective part of this piece.
I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/8/2005 |
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"...Ripped from the pages yet unwritten,
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
Good lines...
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/8/2005 |
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Stark reality poem Ron!!
Love Tinka |
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