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Lori L Moore

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Haiku - A Set of Five
by Lori L Moore
Tuesday, May 10, 2005
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siesta de la tarde-
under his sombrero
industrious dreams

whale watching-
killer whales
playfully observe

along the coast-
empty crab pots
and lonely tales

tide pools-
shallow worlds
from the deep

vine ripened melon
time tested lies-
breakfast and newsmen

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Reviewed by jude forese 5/22/2005
all are vivid images ... i especially like the second haiku ...
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 5/22/2005
just adore these, i truly do, well done...Mark xx
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/19/2005
These are so lovely, very beautiful Haikus Lori,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 5/15/2005
These are great! Each one superb in it's own way. Love this Lori!
Thanks!
Tracey
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez 5/14/2005

Fine poetry here.
I haven't really ever tried Haiku',

Rich
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg 5/14/2005
Great Haiku Lori...my favorite is the third one!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/13/2005
You do beautiful stuff with haiku, girl. Really nice. Thank you for sharing you gift. Love and peace to you, Lori. Regis
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/13/2005
Oh those are great I especially liked that first one.
Excellent!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/13/2005
Nice.

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 5/12/2005
wonderful haikus...love n luck....BHUWAN!!
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 5/11/2005
Stop dating those anchormen Girl! They'll stand you up for the next whale sighting, the next annual crab bake, and the next big sleep on Wall Street. And stick with melons; low cal and easily disposable. Most men are not (LOL) except the for better or worse variety.

Cute 'ku's,
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 5/11/2005
Tasty!! :) Believe the last one is my fave,
too. But they are all delightful. Thanks
for posting them. 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 5/11/2005
Ever the one swimming against the current (Sigh... hehe) though I love the popular last verse, it's the one just before it that brought the audible sigh... it woke my resting brain (Egads!) Wonderful ku, Lori! katy xox.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys 5/10/2005
Delightful haiku's Lori...love the last one!

Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/10/2005
The last is my favorite, but they all show your skill, Lori. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 5/10/2005
Wonderful as always, Lori. Especially love that last one.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/10/2005
Always a pleasure to read your words.........(0:
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/10/2005
Lori,

I love each one seperately, for different reasons. The first made me chuckle *grins*, the second made me wish I were there, watching whales with you, the third brought a sense of nostalgia (not that I've ever crabbed, but o, those lonely tales tell stories!), the fourth is GORGEOUSLY imaged, and the fifth--LOL I have to watch the morning news, even if it's wrong to do so. BRAVA, Ku Master! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/10/2005
I want to pick one and can't Lori, you are the master of ku!
I agree with Sherry!;-)
Alrisha
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/10/2005
The last haiku is very insightful. Wonderful writes.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/10/2005
Again, Lori, your Haiku are perfection. The first one made me laugh and the last made me say Hmmm, so true. The three in the middle teased my thoughts. These are wonderful and made my morning coffee five times better.

Take care,

Sherry
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/10/2005
nice pondering haiku Lori. From the deep, G
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/10/2005
As USUSAL these Hiaku's of yours are so wonderfully mellow that my mind is already drifting off to white sand beaches, marqueritas and girls in white string bikinis oops to early maybe for that but wonderfull imagaes none the less.

Felix
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/10/2005
Pure observations from the depth of the pool of your vivid imagination.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/10/2005
Masterfully done Lori!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/10/2005
An interesting combination, Lori; deep thoughts breaking through the hazy surface of our superficial lives. Still waters sure do run deep and there is so much more to life than that which meets the eye. Taking the time to stop, observe and take notice makes all the difference. This is what these five have made me do - thank you! Kate xx
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