|Reviewed by jude forese
|all are vivid images ... i especially like the second haiku ...|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|just adore these, i truly do, well done...Mark xx|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|These are so lovely, very beautiful Haikus Lori,
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|These are great! Each one superb in it's own way. Love this Lori!
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Fine poetry here.
I haven't really ever tried Haiku',
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|Great Haiku Lori...my favorite is the third one!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You do beautiful stuff with haiku, girl. Really nice. Thank you for sharing you gift. Love and peace to you, Lori. Regis|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Oh those are great I especially liked that first one.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|wonderful haikus...love n luck....BHUWAN!!|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Stop dating those anchormen Girl! They'll stand you up for the next whale sighting, the next annual crab bake, and the next big sleep on Wall Street. And stick with melons; low cal and easily disposable. Most men are not (LOL) except the for better or worse variety.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Tasty!! :) Believe the last one is my fave,
too. But they are all delightful. Thanks
for posting them. 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ever the one swimming against the current (Sigh... hehe) though I love the popular last verse, it's the one just before it that brought the audible sigh... it woke my resting brain (Egads!) Wonderful ku, Lori! katy xox.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Delightful haiku's Lori...love the last one!
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|The last is my favorite, but they all show your skill, Lori. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Wonderful as always, Lori. Especially love that last one.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Always a pleasure to read your words.........(0:|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
I love each one seperately, for different reasons. The first made me chuckle *grins*, the second made me wish I were there, watching whales with you, the third brought a sense of nostalgia (not that I've ever crabbed, but o, those lonely tales tell stories!), the fourth is GORGEOUSLY imaged, and the fifth--LOL I have to watch the morning news, even if it's wrong to do so. BRAVA, Ku Master! Excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I want to pick one and can't Lori, you are the master of ku!
I agree with Sherry!;-)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|The last haiku is very insightful. Wonderful writes.|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Again, Lori, your Haiku are perfection. The first one made me laugh and the last made me say Hmmm, so true. The three in the middle teased my thoughts. These are wonderful and made my morning coffee five times better.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|nice pondering haiku Lori. From the deep, G|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As USUSAL these Hiaku's of yours are so wonderfully mellow that my mind is already drifting off to white sand beaches, marqueritas and girls in white string bikinis oops to early maybe for that but wonderfull imagaes none the less.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Pure observations from the depth of the pool of your vivid imagination.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Masterfully done Lori!!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|An interesting combination, Lori; deep thoughts breaking through the hazy surface of our superficial lives. Still waters sure do run deep and there is so much more to life than that which meets the eye. Taking the time to stop, observe and take notice makes all the difference. This is what these five have made me do - thank you! Kate xx|