|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|This is absolutely fantastic, A.! The mood, tone and language set the stage in artificial light. This is the life of millions, confined in cubicles. God has spared me this day-to-day grind and I thank him...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Not on my job or life, but I seem to recall an old joke as to "if you don't believe in life after death, you should be at a job when 5pm and quitting time comes along!" As always from you sir, excellent...Ed & rufuz (w00f)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Spot on! :) Many are just existing--that's it. No life--BRILLIANT write! Superb imagery--and I agree, those last two verses--WOW!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Superb write Alex, you manage to capture the lives of many in so few words, excellent.
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|This is an awesome portrayal of many lives today. A droning existence that doesn't lend you anything past the norm. I love the third stanza, it really shows what the numbing process does to continue the cycle of everyday life.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|entire imagery and syntax is spectacular ... the conclusion, awesome!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This seemed to sing off the page to me,beautifully written
last two stanzas exceptional!