by Ed Matlack
Wednesday, May 11, 2005
Rated "R" by the Author.
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Ah for the chance to again be young and fearless...LOL! ;)
In your lap,
A head so blond,
Hard to draw,
Yet you do in kind respond…
Day or night,
Either matters not,
Truckers do stare,
Hard to drive straight,
Pull over when the time is there…
First time the charm,
From then we use the arm,
Holding head down,
Eyes kept on road or we will ‘buy the farm’…
© ed ~ 5/11/05
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|you're way ahead of the class... that's why you took a driver's Ed course, no? ;)|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Don't think "distracted" is the word.:) Veddy, veddy
intellasting. Hmmm, if I say "keep it down," will he
think...hmmmm. Say to write what you know...hmmm.
Give good fun, Ed. Thanks!:)
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|I'm not going to even bother to try to top Roger's comments... but I might charge him for medical services as I cracked my skull laughing... at BOTH of you two loonys. Carry on... oh, wait... I don't want to hear that you're in the farming business too soon. Behave! (well, only if you want to... hehe) katy xox|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|In Ct. you can be charged with "driving while distracted". You have to attend remedial Driver's Ed. but you go to the head of the class.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Fearless poetry...from a fearless headEd!!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well actually I think more do that then what we know. Neat though.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You're twisted. :) LOL
But so funny - sex on the brain, eh? :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|sounds nice; i work all weekend, so i can't have any sunday drives. still, a good write; well done, ed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
|ah, nothing like a nice country drive on a sunday afternoon....|