|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|by Jove you're good..love it!
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|This must be the witch that stole my former hubby...:sigh: ;)lol
Really this is beautiful, thank you for the prayers, the transplant is on.
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|excellent structure and rhyme scheme, so much so it has a sonnet feel to it. Splendid work, Robin|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|tightly developed quatrains defining your desire quite effectively ...|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|I've meet her before, or someone just like her.
A splendid write
Blue skies and sunshine
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Robin, you have outdone yourself with this gem!
Everything came together, pic content, and your
exceptional word choice,rhyme, and rhythm! Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The rhythm, rhyme and image all complement one another to achieve a powerful poetic effect, Robin. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a captivating poetic tale, Robin.|
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|I like the rhythm of this as well as the story you tell...excellent write :)|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Rhythm, knowledge, art and contents meet through an imagery grand to compose "Desire", which flows on waves of the sea of imagination to strike and inspire the readers´ souls.
Long healthy creative life may You enjoy, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Dennis Shartlesville (Reader)
|Wow poor victim …but what a way to go! Very nice Robin, very nice.|