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| Reviewed by Heidi K (Reader) |
5/16/2005 |
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| he he,genialt,på tide med en norsk komentar hr også synes jeg =) |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/16/2005 |
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| One way to talk about the nicotine effects of fags. Glad I've never smoked.. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
5/15/2005 |
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This was an excellent write..
And though we be ash, we shall resurrect and become the light once more.
I enjoyed this work.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
5/15/2005 |
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indeed...
I totally agree with the first of your reviews to which I can add no more-
excellent write, excellent sight!! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
5/15/2005 |
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Superb metaphor C.
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/15/2005 |
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I like the way you mixed this one up !
Ashes to ashes dust to dust, and so it goes;-)
Very wise and intriguing work!
Love,
Alrisha
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| Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu |
5/15/2005 |
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I see this as more than what it actually meant. Life is just like that. When you are looking at the present, it seems that all is lost. But a closer look will bring a hope so sure, and so deep. I agree with you that every end has an opposite of it. It makes sense.
Good write! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/15/2005 |
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| Most effective with economy of words. Nicely done. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
5/15/2005 |
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Creative and to the point.
Well done.
Peace |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
5/15/2005 |
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| Well done and intriguing! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/15/2005 |
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| A well described end for those who continue to smoke. |
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| Reviewed by Brian Pellerino |
5/15/2005 |
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C,
Interesting revelation about you hidden in there. Great, short dance.
B |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/15/2005 |
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Most interesting!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
5/15/2005 |
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| Provocative metaphor, a gift for thinkers. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/15/2005 |
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| Truly interesting metaphors! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
5/15/2005 |
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It's all ash in the end. Very thoughtful poem.
M.Rose |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/15/2005 |
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I actually read the metaphors into more than a cigarette in this one. Very cleverly done!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati |
5/15/2005 |
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| A cigarette glows and becomes ash activating the persin using! But there exists no personal pleasure or achivement! unlike a cigarette you a light the lives around you and enjoy with what you do to others gaining se;f satisfaction and happiness. The begining is vital and not the end when every living thing perish! you are a precious jewel dear Hottran! |
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