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Just A Metaphor
by Cathrine Hottran
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The End!

Light in one end,
Dark in the other,
In the end just ash,
Me!

A glow in one end,
A weak character in the other,
In the end just ash,
A Cigarette!
  

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Reviewed by Heidi K (Reader)
he he,genialt,på tide med en norsk komentar hr også synes jeg =)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
One way to talk about the nicotine effects of fags. Glad I've never smoked..
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
This was an excellent write..

And though we be ash, we shall resurrect and become the light once more.

I enjoyed this work.

Allen
Reviewed by June Thompson
indeed...

I totally agree with the first of your reviews to which I can add no more-

excellent write, excellent sight!!
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Superb metaphor C.

Paul;-]
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I like the way you mixed this one up !
Ashes to ashes dust to dust, and so it goes;-)
Very wise and intriguing work!

Love,
Alrisha
Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
I see this as more than what it actually meant. Life is just like that. When you are looking at the present, it seems that all is lost. But a closer look will bring a hope so sure, and so deep. I agree with you that every end has an opposite of it. It makes sense.
Good write!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Most effective with economy of words. Nicely done. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Creative and to the point.
Well done.

Peace
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Well done and intriguing!
Reviewed by George Carroll
A well described end for those who continue to smoke.
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
C,

Interesting revelation about you hidden in there. Great, short dance.

B
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most interesting!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Provocative metaphor, a gift for thinkers. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Truly interesting metaphors!
Reviewed by Mary Quire
It's all ash in the end. Very thoughtful poem.

M.Rose
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
I actually read the metaphors into more than a cigarette in this one. Very cleverly done!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)


Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati
A cigarette glows and becomes ash activating the persin using! But there exists no personal pleasure or achivement! unlike a cigarette you a light the lives around you and enjoy with what you do to others gaining se;f satisfaction and happiness. The begining is vital and not the end when every living thing perish! you are a precious jewel dear Hottran!
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