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INHALE THE THRUST
by A PAX

Sunday, May 15, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Kisses, even to the air, are beautiful.
Drew Barrymore


 

INHALE THE THRUST

 

Warm raptured collisions

Retraced....testified

Arise towards the heavens

To peak....and subside

 

Vanquish the cold

Transition the warm

Humid and wet

Plural the form

 

Winds lacing winds

Breezed to the rush

Blown to and fro

Bouyant with lust

 

Pressing toward center

By equal collide

Inhale the thrust

Taste the wind's sigh

 

 

Ahhhhhhh

 

Taim i'ngra leat

 

Pax

 

A

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Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 5/17/2005
**Gasp** (inhaling the thrust)
**Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh** (exhaling the bliss)
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh... what a poemmmmmmmmmmmm...
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by E. Richardson 5/16/2005
very sensuous, good imagery and rhythm. For some reason I feel a dark influence here...not necessarily a bad thing...kinda like the sexy scary feeling of being in a place you should not be, with someone who is just a little bit bad.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/16/2005
Lady A,

No matter the moniker, there's no disguising your engaging words! An excellent, ethereal beauty you've penned--thank you!

(((HUGS))), love and (always) continued prayers, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 5/16/2005
Lady A_Moeba??? interesting (giggles). I like this Anita, it is sooo ethreal, and so poignant...thnx for sharing, your writing gets better each time I read a poem or story you have written. Thnx sis for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 5/16/2005
You don't waste a word Anita
and you still make it rhyme!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by jude forese 5/15/2005
the thrust of lust is indeed a must ... great poetry!
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 5/15/2005
Hiya Anita...its nice to be back and nicer even to read yourself again,i have missed your work and know i have a lot of catching up to do, ahh sure thats the best bit of being away...the coming home bit... a crackingly good write that gathers pace with each line, very well done, take good care of you and yours, hope we can chat soon, be good my friend...Mark xx
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 5/15/2005
Oh boy, was this one bouyant with lust! Well done.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/15/2005
Lady A, this is conceptually spectacular !
Enjoyed every word!;-)

Love,
Alrisha
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/15/2005
"Taste the wind's sigh" So beautiful
and kisses are always in the air and
hopefully landing where you want them.
Great write Lady A_Moeba
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 5/15/2005
I loved the way you build this to a climax (ooer, I mean a crescendo of course - but that's no better is it?)
Good one A.
love
Ian
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino 5/15/2005
A,

Smashing! I LOVED this. Hats off, this one's a keeper.

B
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/15/2005
Very, very well penned...thanks for this!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/15/2005
This is captivating and exciting to read, Anita. Such beautiful lines and the flow is perfection. I just love the ones that rhyme, too.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/15/2005
Damn, double-damn, this one screams at me. Very good. This one, "Plural our form" cemented my thoughts. Uh, did I miss something, Lady A_Moeba? Didn't you used to be someone else? Yep. I think I missed something.
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 5/15/2005
Enjoyed the build of this and especially loved the climax at the end. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 5/15/2005
Beautiful as always Anita! I love your way with words. : )

Jack
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/15/2005
A most passionate windy ride, Anita - and I love your new name!
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