|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|**Gasp** (inhaling the thrust)
**Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh** (exhaling the bliss)
Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh... what a poemmmmmmmmmmmm...
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|very sensuous, good imagery and rhythm. For some reason I feel a dark influence here...not necessarily a bad thing...kinda like the sexy scary feeling of being in a place you should not be, with someone who is just a little bit bad.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
No matter the moniker, there's no disguising your engaging words! An excellent, ethereal beauty you've penned--thank you!
(((HUGS))), love and (always) continued prayers, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Lady A_Moeba??? interesting (giggles). I like this Anita, it is sooo ethreal, and so poignant...thnx for sharing, your writing gets better each time I read a poem or story you have written. Thnx sis for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|You don't waste a word Anita
and you still make it rhyme!
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the thrust of lust is indeed a must ... great poetry!|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|Hiya Anita...its nice to be back and nicer even to read yourself again,i have missed your work and know i have a lot of catching up to do, ahh sure thats the best bit of being away...the coming home bit... a crackingly good write that gathers pace with each line, very well done, take good care of you and yours, hope we can chat soon, be good my friend...Mark xx|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Oh boy, was this one bouyant with lust! Well done.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lady A, this is conceptually spectacular !
Enjoyed every word!;-)
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"Taste the wind's sigh" So beautiful
and kisses are always in the air and
hopefully landing where you want them.
Great write Lady A_Moeba
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|I loved the way you build this to a climax (ooer, I mean a crescendo of course - but that's no better is it?)
Good one A.
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Smashing! I LOVED this. Hats off, this one's a keeper.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very, very well penned...thanks for this!!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is captivating and exciting to read, Anita. Such beautiful lines and the flow is perfection. I just love the ones that rhyme, too.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Damn, double-damn, this one screams at me. Very good. This one, "Plural our form" cemented my thoughts. Uh, did I miss something, Lady A_Moeba? Didn't you used to be someone else? Yep. I think I missed something.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Enjoyed the build of this and especially loved the climax at the end. :-) ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Beautiful as always Anita! I love your way with words. : )
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A most passionate windy ride, Anita - and I love your new name!|