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Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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Dreamless World
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Monday, May 16, 2005
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Dreamless World


Being dreamless-
We asked for dreams,
To fill the void deep in our empty hearts;
So they sent us Poets…

Who wrote of love and heart-ache,
So vividly we wept as we read,
And our hearts were moved by the
Beautiful words of lovers…

And they sent us painters,
Who painted the sky in fiery hues of
Orange and red…

They painted a circus in the sky,
Using clouds as their medium,
Women with long black hair,
And eyes that glowed like stars…

Ah how we wept,
When we saw that beauty existed still,
That hope was not lost to all-
And love existed still…

In long halls of exhibits,
I watched a child,
Bend to smell the portrait of a single rose.
I could not help but smile.

Reality is in the heart and soul,
He said,
And at last I understood.

Fireside Poetry

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/22/2005
super Reatta, and holds a great deal of water, like every ocean on earth
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/20/2005
Beauty is intuitive and instinctive and its recognition does somehow connect with an invisible strand in heart and soul that just "breaks" when it is touched, releasing an unsurpassable fragrance which lights us up from within. Another really gorgeous write from you, Retta, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 5/19/2005
A mighty fine write.

Joy and starlight
HH
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/19/2005
Completely captivating, Retta. A wonderful poetic offering shared well. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 5/19/2005
Beautiful! Such an inspiring, gorgeous poem. Really brings peace and hope A wonderful tribute to the artists keeping this beauty and dreams alive. With You, being such an outstanding and loving Poet.
Thank You So much. A peace you brought to me.
The little boy made me smile too. Thanks (c :)
Tracey
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/19/2005
breathtaking write, reindeer, absolutely mesmarizing! outstanding; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

you reviewed me; now it is my turn. :) feel free to check out my new story; think you may like it! :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/18/2005
No one can say it quite the way you do. You float around on clouds that move and shift with the wind, but when it is needed you come off that cloud and sink your teeth into the meat of the subject.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 5/18/2005
An absolutely stunning write Reindeer!

Hope, Dream & Love,
Joseph
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/17/2005
Love the way you weaved your truth through this write. Especially loved the ending. I could visualize this child enjoying the rose :-)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/17/2005
Reality is in the heart and soul

It truly is, Reindeer, and this truly is a wonderful poem.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/17/2005
Absolutely a gem. So beautiful Retta!
Reviewed by Carrie Deveney 5/17/2005
How beautiful. :)
-Carrie
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 5/17/2005
Yes... reality is in the heart and soul, and it does have the power of creating masterpieces, and filling the galleries of life with dream and love... that become the muses of more beautiful realities.
Absolutely beautiful, soulful work of Art from the heart, dear Retta.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 5/16/2005
fabulous poem, Reindeer. thanks,
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 5/16/2005
Retta,

This is inspirational poetry at its finest!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/16/2005
This is so beautiful, Reindeer. The gentle flow and the beauty of your verses floated like a whisper on the wind. I am saving this to read again and again.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 5/16/2005
Powerful and beautiful.
Reviewed by jude forese 5/16/2005
a really wonderful poem, Retta ... totally enjoyed its imagery and message ...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 5/16/2005
And They Sent Us (More)Millions Illegal Aliens To Paint (Molest ) Your Children_

Reality Is Enjoy What Little You Can Have Left!

Creative Aspiring Write!

TRASK
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/16/2005
In the picture. The middle cloud I see a man with curly hair,left eye, nose, a smile with a bearded long chin. lol. Btw love the sleepy qualities of the poem. Well it is past midnight here...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/16/2005
This seeps across the heart like a stream of cool water. Unique and origianal. Great piece Retta.
Felix
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/16/2005
Beautiful poetry and the picture adds an excelelnt compliment.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/16/2005
Absolutely beautiful, Reindeer. Love that last verse.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/16/2005
very inspiring Reindeer
excellent write

William .....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/16/2005
Beautiful inspiring write!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Paul Williams 5/16/2005
A superb capture Retta thank
Reviewed by A. Keith Barton 5/16/2005
Beautiful; i'm a great admirer of your poetry--the imagery, emotions, and pictures all fit together, although just reading your words would capture all three; nicely done.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 5/16/2005
Thanks for such inspiration.
John
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/16/2005
How well you capture the important lessons of life Reindeer!
Beautiful uplifting poem, a joy to read!

Love,
Alrisha
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/16/2005
Reindeer,

Breathtaking, exquisitely penned, beautiful write! Well done! You've written a keeper--thank you. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/16/2005
Wonderful and meaningful write.
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 5/16/2005
good write!
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