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Commiseration
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, May 16, 2005
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I am fine. This just came to me, and so, I write.

I understand the storm
When it shouts and cries -
The anger that's displayed
In tormented skies -
Its loneliness in each
Brilliant lightning flash -
Each disappointment in
Every thunder crash -
And we commiserate
In the pouring rain -
Because we understand
The other one's pain.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford	5/17/2005

Insightful deep write. To understand is to heal.




Reviewed by Paul Williams	5/17/2005

Superb and powerful as the storm...ah! how we understand our environment more than we know. Paul;-]




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	5/17/2005

Most profound, Karla.




Reviewed by Kate Burnside	5/17/2005

Oh yes!! I do believe I am the one to conjure them up sometimes, and it's them that are giving vent to my own frustrations; They are therefore a friend saying "Let it all out, Honey!" This has gone deeply to ground with me, Karla, thank you: I feel energised! :)) LOL Kate xx PS Love the way you extend this hand of friendship to your "enemy"!




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	5/16/2005

Outstanding write Karla...I too love T-storms... Peace and love, Carole




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	5/16/2005

Ah I do so love T-storms, though Rufuz does not share my love therein...this poem shows both pain and anger in the storm, wish I could see the lightening...Ed




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	5/16/2005

Oh,oh ,oh...do I read this well...excellent!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	5/16/2005

Karla this is a great write God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	5/16/2005

Powerfully dark and passionate poetry, Karla. Once we understand nature, our fear of it can subside. Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Larry Rochelle	5/16/2005

Good, dark emotion here. Full of concern.




Reviewed by Ronald Hull	5/16/2005

I've never equated a storm with pain, but it's a nice sentiment well stated and punctuated by the flash of lightning.gif Ron




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/16/2005

You are so deeply compassionate Karla! A fine poem that grips the emotions! Love, Alrisha




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	5/16/2005

OOOO, are you having great thunder storms. We had one clap of thunder in the last year.(: I love texan weather, and BBQ's. Interesting subtext special K..




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/16/2005

This is so sublime and yet so clear. I can instantly recognize, sympathise and emphasize with this Poem Karla and you are one heck of a writer and this is the proof. Well done. Felix




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	5/16/2005

(((Karla))) Excellent write, and I love the picture! Very well done; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	5/16/2005

I think so too Karla.




Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran	5/16/2005

excellent!

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