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Commiseration
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Monday, May 16, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I am fine. This just came to me, and so, I write.


I understand the storm
When it shouts and cries -
The anger that's displayed
In tormented skies -
Its loneliness in each
Brilliant lightning flash -
Each disappointment in
Every thunder crash -
And we commiserate
In the pouring rain -
Because we understand
The other one's pain.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/17/2005
Insightful deep write. To understand is to heal.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 5/17/2005
Superb and powerful as the storm...ah! how we understand our environment more than we know.

Paul;-]
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/17/2005
Most profound, Karla.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/17/2005
Oh yes!! I do believe I am the one to conjure them up sometimes, and it's them that are giving vent to my own frustrations; They are therefore a friend saying "Let it all out, Honey!" This has gone deeply to ground with me, Karla, thank you: I feel energised! :)) LOL Kate xx PS Love the way you extend this hand of friendship to your "enemy"!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 5/16/2005
Outstanding write Karla...I too love T-storms...

Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/16/2005
Ah I do so love T-storms, though Rufuz does not share my love therein...this poem shows both pain and anger in the storm, wish I could see the lightening...Ed
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/16/2005
Oh,oh ,oh...do I read this well...excellent!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 5/16/2005
Karla this is a great write
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/16/2005
Powerfully dark and passionate poetry, Karla. Once we understand nature, our fear of it can subside.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 5/16/2005
Good, dark emotion here. Full of concern.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/16/2005
I've never equated a storm with pain, but it's a nice sentiment well stated and punctuated by the flash of lightning.gif

Ron
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/16/2005
You are so deeply compassionate Karla!
A fine poem that grips the emotions!

Love,
Alrisha
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/16/2005
OOOO, are you having great thunder storms. We had one clap of thunder in the last year.(:

I love texan weather, and BBQ's. Interesting subtext special K..
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/16/2005
This is so sublime and yet so clear. I can instantly recognize, sympathise and emphasize with this Poem Karla and you are one heck of a writer and this is the proof. Well done.

Felix
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/16/2005
(((Karla)))

Excellent write, and I love the picture! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 5/16/2005
I think so too Karla.
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 5/16/2005
excellent!



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