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Dream World
by Carole Mathys
Monday, May 16, 2005
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~Dream World ~


Drifting into that void

a dream world that is in-between

conscious thought

and fragmented remembrances

Old memories come flooding in

to mingle with the new

tangling in a downward spiral

Thoughts of your new dreams

get pushed aside when you are helpless

not on guard

the old ones come knocking

tantalizing, taunting, teasing you again

Those dreams you hold at bay

creep in like

lost lovers from before

invading, interfering blending

with your current ones

Confusing longing for what was

with a hunger for what could be

as you struggle to differentiate

between fragmented dreams images

and reality

Knowing that dreams

canít keep you warm at night

or answer passions call

as your subconscious tries to awake


this disconcerting dream world


© 2005

Carole Mathys


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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

On a deep dive through the sea of imagination, "Dream World"
depicts the emotions and the feelings of a
psycho-physiological dream.

I have learned from the reading of "Dream World". It offers an intriguing, enchanting reading.

Long Blissful Creative Life, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Nicely done, Carole. Dreams are wonderful. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese
dreams cannot keep us warm but they sure can set our minds on fire ...

excellent poem!
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
beautifully expressed, carole. as always, a pleasure.
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Truly, Carole, the world of our dreams can be disingenuous and deceiving. A deeply moving write! Thanks so much for sharing.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Outstanding Carole, this is so powerful and true, just loved this poem,

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Very deep true and inspirational. Beautiful Carole.
Thank you! xo(c :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

A mystical place you've penned that many will identify with--powerful imagery!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) WELL DONE!
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
good write, i enjoyed!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Great poetry Here Carole!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Really great poem about the mysterious, and sometimes intrusive, dreamworld. Great photo, too. Dawn
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
i love it, carole; wonderful write and pic! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by E. Richardson
oh yes...have been there and done this...and yes, it is disconserting...painful even. Good job, Carole
Reviewed by William Bonilla
a deep write my dear friend
excellent composing

William ....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Thoughts of your new dreams
get pushed aside when you are helpless
not on guard

How true, Carole, and this is a most profound write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Very creative. I love the theme.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You really have these dream sequences spot on, Carole!
When it happens like that it is unsettling to say the least...
Excellent write well perceived!

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