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Dream World
by Carole Mathys
Monday, May 16, 2005
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~Dream World ~


 


Drifting into that void


a dream world that is in-between


conscious thought


and fragmented remembrances


Old memories come flooding in


to mingle with the new


tangling in a downward spiral


Thoughts of your new dreams


get pushed aside when you are helpless


not on guard


the old ones come knocking


tantalizing, taunting, teasing you again


Those dreams you hold at bay


creep in like


lost lovers from before


invading, interfering blending


with your current ones


Confusing longing for what was


with a hunger for what could be


as you struggle to differentiate


between fragmented dreams images


and reality


Knowing that dreams


canít keep you warm at night


or answer passions call


as your subconscious tries to awake


escaping


this disconcerting dream world


 


© 2005


Carole Mathys


 

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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/28/2005

On a deep dive through the sea of imagination, "Dream World"
depicts the emotions and the feelings of a
psycho-physiological dream.

I have learned from the reading of "Dream World". It offers an intriguing, enchanting reading.

Long Blissful Creative Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/24/2005
Nicely done, Carole. Dreams are wonderful. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by jude forese 5/22/2005
dreams cannot keep us warm but they sure can set our minds on fire ...

excellent poem!
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 5/21/2005
beautifully expressed, carole. as always, a pleasure.
best,
carolyn
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 5/20/2005
Truly, Carole, the world of our dreams can be disingenuous and deceiving. A deeply moving write! Thanks so much for sharing.

Peace.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 5/19/2005
Outstanding Carole, this is so powerful and true, just loved this poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 5/18/2005
Very deep true and inspirational. Beautiful Carole.
Thank you! xo(c :)
Tracey
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/17/2005
Carole,

A mystical place you've penned that many will identify with--powerful imagery!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) WELL DONE!
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 5/17/2005
good write, i enjoyed!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/17/2005
Great poetry Here Carole!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 5/17/2005
Really great poem about the mysterious, and sometimes intrusive, dreamworld. Great photo, too. Dawn
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/17/2005
i love it, carole; wonderful write and pic! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by E. Richardson 5/17/2005
oh yes...have been there and done this...and yes, it is disconserting...painful even. Good job, Carole
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/17/2005
a deep write my dear friend
excellent composing

William ....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/17/2005
Thoughts of your new dreams
get pushed aside when you are helpless
not on guard

How true, Carole, and this is a most profound write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/17/2005
Very creative. I love the theme.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/16/2005
You really have these dream sequences spot on, Carole!
When it happens like that it is unsettling to say the least...
Excellent write well perceived!

Love,
Eileen
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