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a place for us
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez
Wednesday, May 18, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I wrote this brief poem and I liked
it so, I figuered I'd share it.... |
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I had a vision or so it seemed,
I felt I had awakened while still
I dreamed;
The blues skies on the horizon met the
life so verdant...Green, like all
The wonders of a celestial scene!
There were these great big rocks,
and from their very tops,
came water flowing down a stream to me,
came into a lake or pond,
Going , moving further on,
Just where I didn't see;
One thing missing or this would be
Heavenly !
I knew I had arrived in this place ,
on purpose without mistake;
Then in an instance, off in the distance,
I saw a person appear, then I saw your
face getting near and my eyes filled with tears;
it's incredible now we're both here after
So much time wasted-Years!
There's a place for us ...
the end
copyright ã 2004-2005 Rich ( criso) Suarez
all rights reserved
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/25/2005 |
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True poetic picture of togetherness in this
"united at last..." poem, "a place for us".
An enjoyable reading.
Healthy creative long life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
5/20/2005 |
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| AweSome Write and Welcome to A/D. I like your expressions in this poem... Hope it's based on something real, it feels sweet. Truly,Sheee P.S. Thank you 4 my review on my Poem, LisTen... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/18/2005 |
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| I enjoy your work. Your rhyme scheme works well. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/18/2005 |
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Awesome write Rich...and the picture is breathtaking!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
5/18/2005 |
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Excellent write Ricky you've certainly found your place here on AD well done my friend.
Paul;-} |
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