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Jealousy is number one killer of love.

There is rain pouring so heavily
It has drops with unusal size
Out there a girl is cooking yams
The rain can't put her fire off
Jane and I were watching with fervor
We had trouble between us those days
Our love-fire was not burning enough
Jealousy was turning it to simple ashes
Nothing did I spare to save our love
But Jane never felt amused with my offerings
Out from a small window in my chest
I pulled a small conical-shaped organ
It was my heart.It was filled with love
"Go inside it, Jane" I said softly
She jumped into it without hesitation
Jane is now living inside my heart
Any plane flying in my airspace
will not have an airoport to land
Jane is controlling our romantic tower

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Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/2/2006
Wonderful write, Abdi! I truly enjoyed this.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 5/24/2005
"Out from a small window in my chest
I pulled a small conical-shaped organ
It was my heart.It was filled with love
"Go inside it, Jane" I said softly"

Wow! This is sooo romantic! Clap! Clap! Clap!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/22/2005
Yes. Wise and true verse, Abdi-Noor. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/21/2005
Jane is now living inside my heart

And I hope you are living inside hers.
Reviewed by P. Michaels 5/21/2005
Jealousy of one's mate is a killer of romance for sure. Glad you both found a way to rid yourselves of this horrible killer. There's good imagery in this verse.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/20/2005
Abdi Noor, you have such unique imagery!
This is wonderful, and an excellent example
of how to defeat jealousy!

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 5/20/2005
Well stated Brother Abdi-noor a very revealing write. Peace, love and blessings. Mikii
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/20/2005

Dear Brother, a wise write you've penned, excellent description and emotion! Well done!

You and your family are always in my prayers, (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/20/2005
Very romantic. Yes jealousy can kill love.
Reviewed by Sue Hess 5/20/2005
how sweet, hope she is a good pilot
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