|Reviewed by lois christensen
|Sitting outside, I noticed, not butterflies, it's like they left this place. The sad side of this poem hit me hard, I've been through it,|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|I PRAY THAT THIS DOESN'T SOUND...RASH OR HEARTLESS, BUT...THIS PAIN YOU WERE FEELING IS DESCRIBED SO BEAUTIFULLY THAT ONE IS ALMOST GRATEFUL THAT YOU EXPERIENCED IT. I KNOW YOU COULD HAVE DONE WITHOUT IT...I KNOW IT HURT TERRIBLY AND I AM SORRY, BUT...I SO APPRECIATE THIS 'TREASURE' THAT YOUR BROKENESS BROUGHT FORTH. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS EXCELLENT PIECE...GOD BLESS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Wow! Another stunning piece. I love the sudden change of subjective perception as soon as that inner glow dissipates due to love walking out the door. Magnificent!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
My goodness, who is this person that has hurt you so deeply? I hope you do not mind me asking. Your verses are so powerful , and I so admire your talent it hurts me to hear about your misfortunes.
Ton amie qui t'apprecie beaucoup.
Amour et paix,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Very powerful, Regis. All these wonderful things turn dark as the heart breaks. I love your description of the moon...the sneer. Also the butterflies/leaves. One of my favorites from you:) Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|I decided to delve into some of your past poetry, Regis, and I'm glad I did. This is such a beautiful and poignant piece that perfectly conveys the feelings of lost love and togetherness. I'm afraid it's too familiar at times, but it's also a lovely thing. So, even though it has its sad side, you uplifted me anyway...Jerry|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|...'Two years yesterday tomorrow an eternity ago'....'Dead leaves that did not want to die'....'The sky lost its being there for me'...'Your music ended leaving only an aching echo in my soul and flashes of you'.... MOST TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Manes Pierre, Ph.D.
If Voltaire were alive today, he would have said, "French is my language, but love is Regis' language." Your poem is definitely a piece of piece of art. Well conveyed!
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|This means so much to me.... beautiful work, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Redundancy is perfection in the making- YOur heart healing in it's own time and place Reg. BE Happy and WEll- Love this - Love this- so full of feeling- YOur feelings in there deepest form- Thank YOU - I love ALL I see and feel here. Many Tight HuGs 2 U Reg. Lady,SheeeOXO...|
|Reviewed by Helen Downey
|Sometimes the pain from a loss is only harboured in the deepest corners of our subconscious only to submerge if just from the smell of a single flower. I feel the pain and saddness from your words. Great job Regis!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|It seems that all
Are getting up to leave
..I hear ya Regis..been there done that..at the rate I'm going I'll be having that repetitive scenario...sigh
insightful piece indeed.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful write Regis!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Wow! Such deepness and internal yearning, love. Impressive art and verse.
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|And you did tell, so expressively, Regis, a real heart string puller...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|<The moon’s smile
Turned into a sneer
Scaring the stars>
Wow! Regis, don't how you got this together, but it sure is a wonderful poem...lovely,
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Touching, sad...such a declaration of love not yet fading.
Memories have a way of pouncing back into the unwilling mind.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|So nostalgic ... but so beautiful!!! Keep on living!!!
God bless, Regis,
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
This is a movie you've written and I feel I've
just watched instead of reading it.
|Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
This poem says much about your feelings. It tells of pain, sadness, and tears- but it ends with you still having hope. Never leaving- never giving up. That is good.
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|OMG this is so reminiscent of what I feel too right now, I call it my freeze frame of mind, it hurts, it numbs, it teaches..
Love and peace to you Regis
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yep ... sometimes we seem to get caught up in a still picture frame of what means the most to us ... excellent poem, Regis ... thanx for sharing this passionate and insightful poem ...|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Beautiful Regis, and so sad....
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Very beautiful, Regis
it feels very sad.
love and peace
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|This reminds me a bit of E.B.B.'s "How do I love thee..." only you've penned it in your own special way. Beautiful, Regis...
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Emotionally moving and superbly expressed, this is you at your poetical best Regis excellent my friend.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|super and a joy to read, no we can't leave physically REg.but hopefully mentally we can deal|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|The Whole Idea Is Not to Look Back, But To Enjoy Good Of That What Could Have Been Can With Another,i.e. Experience Is Not Only It Best Teacher It Was Is Still Your Preacher...
I Stopped Looking, Seeking,Thinking Simply Because What I Seek Is Not In Or Of This Physical World--It's Hell but,I Can Suffer(Pain) Little Longer Than!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I don't see the redundancy, all I see is a man crying out for that which he cannot have, though I may be wrong in my interpretation...none the matter, I still love to read any and all postings by a certain French gentleman in beautiful Canada...Peace friend Regis, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
|This is chilling. Leaves questions: Did she die? Leave you and make you think she was coming back until she winked? Have you had a lot of death and you cannot follow your loved ones? Or are they all off to new things and you're stuck/ Don't answer. My mind loves playing with these things. Good job|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Totally knockout, Regis, and a pulsating, finger-on-the-button write as always. You have an amazing ability to be able to capture the quintessence of a special moment and to freeze-frame it with your own brand and stamp of authentication. Especially in the case of what you are describing here. The lines "It seems that all Are getting up to leave But me I cannot" just totally blow me away: you sound like me - if I am "stuck in the moment", I can't believe how others can be just "getting on with life". The burning retina/eye thing really strikes a chord, too. Scintillating as always, but I am so sorry for your pain. "Goodbye" is not a word I am good with at the best of times... it is even worse when the parting is not equally balanced and felt. BIG HUGS!! lol kATE XX|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Some exceptionally heartwrending lines in your beautiful, poignant write...keep ever looking forward, and know you're in my prayers.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Beautiful REgis, and i too agree with Ed...
your writings...especially these last few I can feel you beginning to heal, even if you do not realize it...
Sing praise to God for the gift he has given you...
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|You have a real way of expressing yourself, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|outstanding poetry, mon ami! c'est magnifique!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
you are always in my prayers!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Well done, Regis, well done!|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Thank you for sharing this, Regis. Beautiful work.|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This leaves me collapsed and empty, Regis, as I feel the change that has left a hole in your soul. It feels so much like a death that has taken away the breath of your spirit. We all must trudge onward. Excellent writing!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|"Your music ended..."
Sheer poetry, Regis... a simple expression with huge impact! You need not preface as you have up there, for you are among "your own" here and Ed's correct... the healing process, for we who write, begins with scraping our gut and putting it into words. This is one of your best from a poetry standpoint AND from a human one. katy xox
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Leaving only an aching echo
In my soul
Such an ache needs to be penned for the healing process to begin, and you've penned it extremely well, Regis.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|You've captured the pain and longing
in a very visual way. It helps to
get it out and love is either joy
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Oh Regis, I think at one point or another we all have felt the pain you so eloquently expressed here. If we have not then we have never truly loved.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Out of the ashes the Phoenix rose.|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|a moving write, regis; well done. life's "seasoning process" can make one want to dive for cover...
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Deep and powerful. Regis I deeply feel the real pain your soul is undergoing but the only thing I can say is Let it pass like a shadow and rebuild life with a renewed vigor.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh this reveal the depth of the deepest pain..and I think to some extent I can relate to this most deeply felt oiece Regis!!
A person as pure of heart as you should never have felt like this!!
BIG hugs and warmest love to you my dear friend!!
Maybe one day we will understand WHY!!
|Reviewed by J.C. Brinson-Untiet
|Fantastic. I do love the way you write. Your getting better with each poem. Keep it up. Love it. JC|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This one stings with the reality of loss. Fantastic capture of this emotion.|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Regis This is Such a deep and moving poem. So true of the emotions felt. It is beautiful. each line is so moving and touching.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Regis, I don't think I've ever heard it expressed so well!
This tears the heart to shreds,especially when we can remember
similar feelings;-)My heart goes out to you. Perhaps it's time
to turn the page! Start a new one...
Love and Peace,
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I do not think this is redundant but an honest emotion filled write. You did this in fine style.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|This burns with angst and passion. There aren't too many among us that haven't felt this at one point in our lives...remembering. Incredible write Regis my friend...Michelle|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Wow, this puts me in another place. Too, too real. I feel as if I'm in the twilight zone... Good stuff Regis.