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Thought I'd introduce you to a friend
who lives close by. Make that very close. Blessings always, Pea
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Decked by a Wren A Carolina wren pauses for a breath between hops and eyes, then dissects me with a scalpel as sharp as the flint in each brown-whorled eye. Sly cut that says, Dig the claws and the beak. Wing struts made special, you know. Just means to open, so I will order my eyes to stay on the rail she uses on stopovers. Sensing she will wait, I grab the knife. My turn! I crow. Suddenly she lets go. Think she’s eager to help me prove she and I are more than the female parts scientists catalog and park on dust. Why we rebuild. Teach our children to arm and fly back to March, knowing full well squirrels, spiders and mites have trashed our nests. Hers is a rusty red mailbox tacked on an inside wall of a deck; mine a dated house in need of paint. Spiders weave webs across our doors. Toxins seep from acid rain. Snow, hail, feet. Yet we return to pick up, sweep and lay cheap carpet. Spread moss green comforters to warm those who light. Spend countless hours fixing, futzing. Dive to the store and dash back to be sure everyone gets enough protein. Don’t kid yourself. You’ll have to pitch in. How else are we going to have a blast. Uh oh. Someone’s pointing her beak to let me know she isn’t going to wait around for me to tie thread. Winks, grabs a twig, and shoots her high-falutin’ tail, turns her head to show off a white racing stripe, shakes the pollen out of the feathers, corrects for drafts, tucks in the flaps, and is home.
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, May, 2005
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/23/2005 |
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beautiful! well done, sweet pea!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/22/2005 |
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| NIce... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
5/21/2005 |
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| How wonderful to have a feathered friend like your Carolina wren! Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/21/2005 |
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This is a wonderful post, Pea. Thank you for letting us get to know your little friend.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/21/2005 |
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| Thank you for the introduction. Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/21/2005 |
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Outstanding piece Pea!!
Thanks for this very nice offering!!
love Tinka |
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